| Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 07:33 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This is really good so far. (And Battle Athletes fics are kinda scarce, so finding a good one is even scarcer.) I never thought about Akari's mom and dad that much. Anyways, please continue! I really wanna see what happens!