| "My neighbor over the street" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Airee On: January 22, 2005 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!!!!!!! I really love your fic!! I found it last year but I forgot about it and I found it again!!!! I just want to say great job and please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PS. the mystery neighbor is Trowa....right?
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Reviewed By: Terrasa On: January 28, 2003 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
-.- well you don't have to change it just because of my review. I just assumed that it was Trowa across the street since Hee Wu and Duo were all accounted for. ummm oh yeah, I was gonna give ya some advice, things i noticed in the first chapter! Try not to put notes in the middle of a chapter, or paragraph. Just put the number and then the note at the end, because it interupts the story line flow... thing. Yeah. Anyways ^.^' Sometimes I really don't make sense to myself. Ugh. Oh well, I'll update soon also. And 'you' keep up the good work. I can't believe you wrote this a year ago and didnt post it! *shakes head* Well, I've a couple things that probably won't be posted for a long time also, so I shouldnt be one to talk. Lol.
ja'ne |
Reviewed By: Terrasa On: January 27, 2003 20:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww That was really good! I want to know what happens when Quatre finally meets the guy across the street. ^.^ It's Trowa right? It better be Trowa! Lol. Post the next chapter soon, onegai? |
