| "Operation: Mr. Right" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Aileen [Mediaminer Member who's too lazy to get off her butt and login] On: February 11, 2004 15:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Wheee!!! Fun fic!!! I haven¡¦t really read LotR, but I know the basic storylines. ^_^ Some words are missing from your sentences though. It¡¦s probably just the site, but check anyway, ok? Keep writing! (Why is everyone picking on poor Mamoru? ?_? I never got that¡K)
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Reviewed By: Shiina On: February 25, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
whoa, nice story... simply amazed... *snaps out of it* anyways, its very cool... funny as well. please update soon! |
Reviewed By: adb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
the enjoyment factor is low because, your sentenses seem to be fragmented. It's hard to read because it looks as though i'm reading only one side of the story. |
Reviewed By: Yume On: February 01, 2003 12:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not really into the lord of the rings but this i like please write more. It's an exelent stroy so far. keep up the good work you have the skill of a professinal writer. thats a rare gift dont let it go to waste. Anyways keep writing and dont stop!
Yume
chaoticruby@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Kolinshar Jackie-chan Benito [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh/.... ic how this thing works now.. lol, all who read this, ignore all my comments. |
Reviewed By: Kolinshar Jackie-chan Benito [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent story. plz keep it up |
