| "Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: your story
Reviewed By: warbringer67 On: April 28, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it was great becaause it didnt ramble and as soon as one problem was over another arised i cant wait for the other part of the story!
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Reviewed By: Mystical_Angel On: July 29, 2003 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story.. very exciting... hope u writ more. please write more |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see err read the next chapter on the wedding! Make Van's face priceless when he sees Folken! |
Reviewed By: Moon Girl On: July 07, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like he sory i is good coninue soon please you did a good job of his one. |
Reviewed By: sk8erang0l [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 00:35 CST
Comment/Review:
good story line, but it moves too fast |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh it's getting SO good continue! ^-^ |
