| "Book 1: All it took was a little kindness..." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Good Fic
Reviewed By: Ugleboi On: September 29, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on being the only fanfic i've read from beginning to end without drooling with boredom. It also helped that it was a love interest with Motoko and i love me some Motoko.
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Reviewed By: SOD On: August 25, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way that you have developed your characters. How Motoko is reacting to Keitaro, and vice versa. All of the ideas mesh into one another seamlessly. I give you a big thumbs up! Keep up the great work, I will be reading! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful ending! Too bad he didn't choose..though in my heart I say he chose Motoko.lol. This was a great fic to read. You have a real writing talent. This made me smile alot, and satisfied my reading urge for the day. Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suu sure had a unique story to tell. I liked it; though it was kinda sad. Too bad Keitaro has to go apologize to Naru now. -sigh- But he wouldn't be the good guy I love if he didn't though, so oh well. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, is Naru sad? Heh, that's too bad now isn't it. -smirk- As you can see,I don't like her much. Anyways, I think she got what she deserved. This was emotional yet touching. It made me smile. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YUS! A nice package of romance and action baby!!! WOOT! It's interesting how creative you got with the subconcious characters. I really liked that scene. I especially like the strong bonds between Suu and Motoko, and Suu and Keitaro. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Beautiful! Lovely!! This just keeps getting better 'n' better!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that romance in the air I see? WOOT! I'm liking it, I'm loving it. more! MORE!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww!!! Do I need to tell you how sweet that was? Please tell me you're shooting for a Motoko/Keitaro pairing!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sigh- A storm's a brewin eh? Did Keitaro mention his feelings for her..his dreams? Only something serious could produce this reaction... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is where the fun really starts! That was sweet and funny. I'm loving the chemistry going on between Motoko, Keitaro, and Suu. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting...very interesting. |
