| "The Smiles of Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: smiles of the stars
Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when r u going to update this fi come on plaese update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: the ties that bind
Reviewed By: Jarrod [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
if a little disjointed the overall outline of the story was catching.... i have hopes of reading more as i was quite taken by this fic
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! FINISH OMG PLEASE OMG I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND LOL
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! FINISH OMG PLEASE OMG I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND LOL
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Reviewed By: Tyi Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good but please hurry up nd finish!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 03:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 20:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooohhhhhhhhh please update sooooooooooooon
hehe is heero gonna be ok
is duo gonna help him
hows hilde gonna react when she finds heero got to meet duo and got backstage passes
ooohhhhhh dermail sucks so bad
aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh please please please please please please please UPDATE SOOON!!!!!! hehehe 2x1 FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! moo |
Reviewed By: ozzypoos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This chapter was great! I cant wait for the next chapter, so you better update again soon!! |
Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess On: June 13, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dear Ella-Fate2x1,
BSG: Dermail, ewww. Not even I would put Heero through that much torture, and I love torturing Hee-chan!
Heero: Ella-FaTe2x1 don't you dare give her ideas.
Duo: EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWW you put MY Hee-chan with Dermail! What's wrong with you!
BSG: Hush Duo, your being rude. Keep going, its a nice story, however I think you make Heero just a little to much of a wimp. Otherwise everythingelse is splendind, please keep going. |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 17:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe thats more like it
great story but Dermail? -shudders- hehe good touch though it er definitly makes it more creepy
-grumbles- damn hilde i hope she falls into a pit full of rabid racoons and one of them jumps up her nose
hehe Duo is sweet hehe keep up the great work
please...
2x1 FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: his infernal majesty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
please tell me your gonna update this
holy crap it was awesome
omg please update er it's a good plat and personally i dont think anyone could write it like u could
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY FOR ALL THOSE YET TO BE DISCOVERED 2X1 FANS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ladye Black On: March 22, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I reviewed this before? I could swear I saw this on another site and read it. Well, just in case...this fic is GREAT!!!! I _really_ hope you continue it. It's well written even if the first part is a little confusing, but I have a feeling it will play out soon. I hope that you post another part soon because I swear, the wait is killing me. You don't want me to die, right? *puppy eyes* See you don't. (I hope) |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 05:44 CST
Comment/Review:
This is going to be updated, yeah?? Cause I really wanna see what happens when DUo comes in and the 'attention' he gives to Heero. LOL. ITs great so far...please update again soon. ja ne |
