Reviewed By: Bird Of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely prologue, great idea so far, the only reason I gave you a few love marks was because I don't think it's fair to judge just on the prologue alone. So when (if??) you update I'll see about higher marks. ^_^ It is very nice though, your writing is beautiful.
Can't wait to see how this plot develops more and what it'll become! I have a feeling this has the potential of a fantastic story. Hope you update. ^_^
BOF |
