| "Sides of the Same Coin" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Becca Stareyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good... not quite sure if I like your style of writing -- it strikes me a bit like you're telling, not showing -- but the story itself is interesting. The first bit of the first chapter was my favorite part -- it seemed well-described... I'm interested to see where you take this story.
I'd write a longer review |
Reviewed By: German Milk Maid On: February 10, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, definatly original so far; please continue because its good. |
