| "The Power of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: little petite angel On: February 19, 2003 04:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
one you said she was hit in her stomach !!!
how could the bullet pierce her heart ???
and those people die instantly and it was ash is fault !
i hate it whent they are all goody good lets face it it was his fault |
Reviewed By: Ambient On: February 17, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
That was exstremely tragic, but I really liked it. Not just any story can make me almost cry! Great Work! ^_____~ Ambie |
