| "Sweet Tomorrow" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: AmarinRose@aol.com On: April 29, 2004 19:34 CDT
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Damn, this is an interesting story. I really wish you'd update soon. Please?
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Title: Please!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 18, 2003 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue!! This is very good so far!
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 16:49 CST
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I like it so far. I haven't seen many Malik fics, and this one's pretty good! Keep it up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! It was mag-ni-fi-cent!!! I luved how you had Malik explain Ryou! It was interesting! |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 14:41 CST
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Pretty good, great idea. Though I do think Bakura will quite object to his friend with a crush on his little brother. ;) And isn't he out of character, protecting Ryou? Flushing his head down the toilet? *chuckles* |
Reviewed By: xtreemmasheen3k2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 00:55 CST
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I don't read anything with Yaoi in it. That's just nasty. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 08:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's great! I can't wait to find out what will happen. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: February 09, 2003 10:27 CST
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kyaaaaaaaaaaa! another malikxryou fiction *_______*
more! more!more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
udapte soon please! i want see malik and ryou meeting |
Reviewed By: Ego On: February 09, 2003 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unique, I am sure. I think it has very well done descriptions and a plot that looks to be a rather interesting read.
Now, sorry for my frankness, but here's a problem. I feel I should point it out.
In all, I saw slight mistakes that should never be held against an author on a fan fiction site. But, looking over those, my main concern is how you tended to jump from one point to another without concluding the first. For example: I was in the air of Isis coming up and saying something when I'm suddenly sidetracked with her age and appearence. You did things like that at many different points.
Now, it may or may not sound wierd I'm seriously reviewing, not just begging for an update. I like to write long coments. Again, sorry for seeming rude, but that's how people like me inprove thier writing, seeing the errors and avoiding them later on. I hope this helps and that you won't hate me entirely, I have nothing against yaoi an typed quite a few popular fics with that as the base level. I do hope you understand.
As I have noted, this story plot is quite original I would enjoy seein how it progresses. Please don't do anything to this fic because of what I say. I just have to inform you! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 10, 2003 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I LOVE YOUR FIC! Its a great idea! Write more! And dont change a thing! |
Reviewed By: Lauren Filiatreault On: April 06, 2003 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kniw, I never review unless the fic is good or original, but I must say, I loved this fic. A shame ther is no more chapters. Can you update? PLEASE!!!!!!! It's so hard to find MarikxRyou on the net! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lauren |
