| "Bardock's Third Child" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Why?
Reviewed By: Kitana_is_number_one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why do you put off updateing this fic. It is really good and should be continued. If not for the readers then for the fic itself. It deserves to be finished it is that good.
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Reviewed By: Crecy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I would luv it if you otld me when you update. My E-mail is
Cruelty2me@yahoo.comPlez update soon! |
Reviewed By: Side On: June 07, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good storyline one of my favoites... |
Reviewed By: Ria On: April 30, 2003 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll only review if you write, so write! |
Reviewed By: Alfa star On: April 29, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is excellent,but you need to write more often |
Reviewed By: Ria On: April 14, 2003 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Ria On: March 18, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE! PLEASE WRITE! PLEASE WRITE! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it too and I agree it needs more detail and contnet but other wise it has turned into a great story witha few more chaps. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your getting there keep up the good work. to tell you the truth my frist fic didn't havea lot of detail either. I stilll like this story keep them coming. |
Reviewed By: Kerara On: June 15, 2003 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally a fanfic NOT about vegeta and bulma (i really hate her), this has 2 b one of the coolest fanfics i've eva red, please can u get sum more chapters on i'm desperate.
PS watch out for spelling mistakes |
Reviewed By: Ria On: March 23, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Review soon! Also, under the Legend of Zelda facfics, there's one called the Story of a Girl. Please read and/or review it so the lazy author will start writing.
Thank-you. |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE IT, BUT I THINK THAT U SHOULD PUT MORE DETAIL INTO IT, OTHER THEN THAT I THINK ALOT OF PEOPLE WOULD REALLY LIKE IT CAUSE I DO! |
