| "Learning to feel" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: mistress
Reviewed By: ai On: March 06, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely AWESOME please continue
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Title: review to last chapter:PINK
Reviewed By: MoonKnightess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. You've got humor and you've got ingenuity. Please continue it. MoonKnightess
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Title: more chaps!!!!
Reviewed By: Night wing On: February 07, 2004 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i like heero & usagi to be together
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: December 11, 2003 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
hey can't it be hiiro/makoto?!??! thats like da coolest couple plz?/ and more hahha pink torture house!!!
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Reviewed By: Taiyoukai_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
This is very good! You should definetely keep writing!!! For pairings? I like trowa/usa hiiro/usa or duo/usa i think you should go duo/usa because they are complete oposites (in this story)and he could make her feel emotians again or something! But hey it is your story notmine! Just keep writing m'kay?
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Reviewed By: Ro On: September 23, 2003 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic. can't wait till you write more. i personally like wufie/usa fics but dou fits with usa's characher in this story. i don't like the rei/wufie thing though
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Reviewed By: ruka tenou girl On: August 11, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LUV your story. I think it should be Usagi and Herro Dou and Mina Ami and Quatra Trowa and Lita and Rie and Wufia. |
Reviewed By: Saris Yui On: July 04, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but change serena guy with trowa or heero there selient like her in the story perfect for each other but still good story. |
Reviewed By: girldancer001 On: July 01, 2003 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving it so far, can't wait for the next chapter!!
My vote on couples is Hiiro and Serena, Duo and Minako, Quatre and Makota, Wufei and Rei, Troa and Ami!!! |
Reviewed By: Enternal1990 On: June 25, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should match the Cadets with same number as the Pilots hook up with them.
For example
Usa/Hee |
Reviewed By: trippinwithcats On: June 24, 2003 14:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very funny fic. Write more, please! |
Reviewed By: Aniva On: June 23, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your story but you should
update more often, please!!
And I vote for Heero/Usagi PLEASE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saris Yui On: May 05, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Serena being a perfected soldier like herro they need to have a gun stand off and see who gives in first.great story but poor serena losing her sis we need some darien bashing and hidden past stuff hope to read more bye! |
Reviewed By: bunny On: April 09, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked the plot of the story, and it's fun to read, and i think that usagi should be with either Heero, or Trowa. |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: March 20, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is great! i think i know the pairs already!!! write more soon!!!^^
~bunny~ |
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