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"School of Magick" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ]
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 Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon  On: February 16, 2003 10:40 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think Kaiba should be be a shadow user, anlong with Yami Bakura, since they both are pretty cold. And Shizuka should be a light user, since she's so kind. Very creative! I really like it so far!
Keep updating!
 Reviewed By: Kye  On: February 16, 2003 04:04 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi! I like your story, it's interesting.
So please continue soon.^_^

Oh and I think Kaiba should be Water or Fire.He is Yugis' rival after all.
Y.Bakura should be Shadow or just to be diffrent(and totaly contrasting)Light.
Shizuka should have Air.
 Reviewed By: silvermoonstar  On: February 15, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kaiba-aquamancer
Yami Bakura-shadowmancer
Shizuka-illummancer


Keep up the fic, it's really,really interesting!! can't wait to see what happens next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Me again.
1: Kaiba should have Shadow.
2: Shizuka should have Light.
And
3: Yami Bakura should have Shadow.
Enjoy.
 Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
If thiers an element for Daeth thin it shoud go to kiaba if not make him a shadow element and bakura is the same as yami ^.^
keep going!
 Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 16:21 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW! You have the coolest ficcie ever in the history of Mediaminer! I'm going to stick to this fic like glue!

My recommodations
1. I believe Kaiba should be a fire type like Yuugi. After all, they're supposed to be rivals and it would be more of a challange if they are they same.
2. Yami Bakura should be Shadow, he is evil yah know!
3. Shizuka should be water I think, either that or air like Ryou, because she is kinda like a flowing person, not rough, like others.
 Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 15:02 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I can't wait till we get some fluff between Yami and Yugi. By the way here are what I think Kaiba, Shizuka, and Y.Bakura.

Kaiba: Water Elemental

Y.Bakura: Shadow Elemental

Shizuka: Light Elemental

Update soon!!!
 Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2003 15:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Get goin' on it! More!
 Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2003 00:09 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool, but i can see yugi as fire his more of a earth element sweet and jental.
keep going ^.^
 Reviewed By: Kairi  On: February 13, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool story!!!
Write more soon
 Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice plot. Really good wording. Yugi seems more of a light elemental to me. He's just soo sweet and bright! ^_^ Betcha five pesos that Yami's a shadow elemental! Please update soon!!
 Reviewed By: Death Shadow Dragon  On: February 13, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very creative and origanal! I rallt liked it! And I'm guessing Kaiba's gonna be a shadow user, right? Anyway, great story!
 Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 22, 2003 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw! how sweet! I was thinking that Yami would probably be using shadow instead of fire and Yugi would probably be using light. But oh well, it's still good!
 Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 16, 2003 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
^___^ happy duel! ^__^ i liked the duel but couldn't help but laugh. in the eps some duels will take like a friggin million years ^__^ happy duel! i liked it though. get to the Ryou/Bakura fluffiness soon k? ^__^ happy writing!
 Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 15, 2003 11:34 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KEEP WRITING!!!! This is a good fic. New chapter. New chapter. I think Yami's a shadowmancer.
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