| "School of Magick" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 30, 2003 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I can't wait to see more pairings. Seto/Jou and Bakura/Ryou. Pleaze update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel 101 On: August 01, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the magick elements they fit in with all the magick and stuff .i like it, it's not bad at all.
PLEASE try to UPDATE ASAP!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AolaniDathomir [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 07:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Quite an interesting AU ficcie. I'm waiting to see what you'll do with the rest but so far it's really great! you made them both cry!! So sad, and yet...pretty image...write more soon. |
Reviewed By: articwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENES DURING THE COMPETITION!!! I HOPE YAMI AND YUGI KICKS EVERYONES BUTTS!!!!! Y/YY RULES!!! |
Reviewed By: sprinket On: June 28, 2003 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was k but i would ov rated higher if u told us wat happened when yami met kaiba!!!!!!! So plz put the next chapter up k |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam(not logged in) On: June 24, 2003 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami: I don't cry...
*Sam stamps on his foot*
Yami: O.O.... T____T
You do now. Anyway... I get this horrible feeling there's gonna be a lot of tears when the tournament comes so give me a warning to bring me Kleenex tissues ok? CONTINUE!!!!!
Yami: *crying* She hurt me foot...
Seto: Wimp....
Yugi:...
*Seto finds himself being thrown out of a balcony with nothing but his Sponge Bob Boxers on*
Joey: Nice left hook Yug...
Yugi: ^________^
Seto: *on the floor* TRAITOR!!!! YOUR SUPPOSED TO BE MY LOVER...!!!
Joey: You ain't the boss of me... pimp daddy...
Seto: INU!!!!
Joey: JACKASS!!!!
This could go on for a while so I'll just end it here...
Seto: MONKEY!!!!
Joey: TRENCH COAT FREAK!!!!!
-_-***** |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 08, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait to read more... What happens during the tournament? |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 07, 2003 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More. Moooooore. Mooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
You... don't... know... Skippy? *starts tearing up then wails* WAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Yugi: Oh boy... There, there...Sam you can't expect 'everyone' to know Skippy the Bush Kangaroo... (Austrailian programme about a kangaroo who rescues people. Kinda like Lassie. You've heard of Lassie right?)
WAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!! WAAAAH!!! WAHHH!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! WAHHH!!! WAHHH!!!! *immediately stops crying and acts normal* Ok that's enough wailing. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN!!!!!
Seto: You're weird....
O_O *blink, blink* O_O... If you're suppose to be a genius you should of noticed the abnormality of my behaviour long ago you stupid pillock...
Seto: T___T
BTW put Jou with Seto... They literally say that they belong together.
Jou and Seto: We belong together.
See? |
Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about not reviewing your chapters lately. I was busy updating my site and I completely forgot about your story. I read chapters 10-14 and just adore all the Y/Y fluffiness. Thank You! Though it is sad to hear that Grandpa Motou is dead.
Uhh question: When are Seto and Bakura coming into the story? I want to see some interaction between Seto and a certain blondie (as if you already don't know)and I'd love to see the Tomb Robber cuddling with Ryou!
Update soon! Ja ne! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: April 04, 2003 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
IG:Oh you so have to add more magic action
Ry: and a Lemon
IG: Please???
Ry:But that was good magic action
IG: Yup really good I love this story
Ry: Me too write more soon
*IG and Ry wave Yami/Yugi flags* |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 16:42 CST
Comment/Review:
FLUFFFFFFFYYYYYYYYYYY STUFFFFFFYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! ^___^ now then i now i'm nagging when i keep saying this but plz!! plz!!! get to Ryou/Bakura!! ^__^ don't yoa think we've all waited long enough?? |
Reviewed By: Insanegoth On: March 28, 2003 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
IG: Hi oh that was good magic action next chappie kewl
Ry: are you gona add a lemon to theis ficcie??
IG: yeah that would be interesting but the rating and all oh well
Ry: even if ya don't still a great story
IG: Yeah...keep going
Ry: Okay I think thats about it..
IG: Yup cya later
Ry: bye |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAY FLUFF FLUFF FLUFF!!!! *singing to the tune Skippy the Bush Kangaroo* #FLUFFY!!!!! FLUFFY!!!! FLUFFY THE BIG SQUIDGY THINGIE!!!!
YGO: *fall anime style*
Yugi: Ack... not that again. She's been doin' that to every single fluffy story that she's ever read so far. *points furiously at Yami* AND YOU KEEP GIVING HER TIC TACS INSTEAD OF HER PILLS AND MAKING HER SUGAR HIGH!!!
Yami: I didn't give her tic tacs last time...
Yugi: Yeah you gave her lemon sorbet drops...
FLUFFY!!! FLUFF FLUFF FLUFF!!!! *throws around fluff all over the place* Continue!!!! WEEEEEE!!!!!
Yugi: And I guess you've done it again haven't you?
Yami: No I didn't I made sure. I gave her these. *reveals*
Yugi: O_O Those are peanuts... SHE'S ALLERGIC TO PEANUTS!!!!
*Sam dies* |
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