| "Get Sexy With Pocky" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: crazy one [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hot. and i really, really want a box of pocky now.
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Reviewed By: autumn+obs seto On: November 17, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:autumn:Why was there no lemon? You should of had a lemon.Grrr.NOW what am I going to do? :Obs seto:Your going to go work on the first chapter of are story. You can even go start on the lemon. :Autumn::face lights up and flushes pink:Realy?!? :obs seto:Of corse! :autumn::runs off:Weeeeeeeee!! :obs seto:Shes nuts.And way too obsessed with sex. :autumn::from other room:I heard that! :obs seto:OPPS*^_^*oh well.finish other storys soon.I get mine... :autumn:And mine!!! :OBS SETO:posted as soon as posable.Luv ya.
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Reviewed By: Cherreh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 03:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggle* I love it. Pocky is yummy. My and my sister had bought a large box of like 1 foot pocky once. :P Yummy... |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Have you guys written other stories here before? I think I've read some. You're such good writers! Lol. I think my favorite line was Seto Kaiba's (in ch.1?): "If he comes back with his shirt on inside out, I’m just leaving." |
Reviewed By: shadowedhalo On: April 12, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
teehee. i glad it ended happy!!! and i guess bakura's plan didn't turn out so bad in the end. hmm.... i wonder where my school's janitor closet is??? *hentai thoughts* oh, hee *cough* anyway, great characterization, as always. and good luck on ROTD, get some more chappys out!! |
Reviewed By: ryoubakurafan On: March 11, 2003 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
awwww this story is so cute!!! and i love Pocky!!! now give us a lemon....please? *big Yugi eyes* |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba On: March 09, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo ::cracks up:: Ahahahahahahahhahahaha~!!!!
Lara: ::smirk:: Luckily, my hikari hasn't learned how to throw me out of my soul room yet! Poor Bakura.....::snort:: Not!
LK: That was so good!!! I love it! And I would have reviewed your pics, Xpyne, but it wouldn't let me, so I'll try again later. ~.^ Ja ne~!!! |
Reviewed By: Arwynn On: March 09, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes sweat from brow* Whew, you had me worried! I'm a big Yami/Yugi fan, so I was like, "Waiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!" (By the way, do you know the actual English translation of that word?) I loved it! It was great! Yayness! Coolness! Whoop-ee! Yo! Excellent-ay! Yeah, baby, yeah! That was so-- *gets dragged off by cousin, who wants to read more fics* |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: March 05, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey nice fice really good pairing but your lucky u fixed the trouble with Yami and Yugi and Seto or RED DRAGON SIZED FLAMES WOULD BE COMING YOUR WAY IN GREAT AMOUNTS K ^____^ just to let u know |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 02, 2003 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Bakura is certainly twisted, but no one can say he doesn't pay attention to things. Personally, I don't know what was wrong with just staying up on the roof, since obiviously if Yugi used to go there to cry, no one ever went up there. Of course then we wouldn't have had the closet scene. XD |
Reviewed By: Julie K [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewing sooner. This was such a fun story. Bakura is totally evil, stealing cupcakes, playing mind games and such. You made Yami so dense. However it did make for a rather funny and sweet fic. I loved the end. I really thought Yugi was going to take out a cigarette, but it was just his pocky. Very cute! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: March 01, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story!! ^_^ Really! I loved it! I waited for you guys to update everyday! ^_^ Super awesome! Kinky closet sex and bathroom sex sounds so much fun! ^-^ I am still mad at Bakura though...baka tomb robber! He had no right to do what he did to Yuugi-chan...awww... Anyways this was great and funny and I am leaving now so Ja ne!
(Y+Y4EVER!) ~POCKY RULES!!!!~ ^______________^
^^;; |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
That was good! I'm glad that Yami, Yuugi, and Seto all got together. That was cool. |
Reviewed By: ananda On: February 24, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright, it's been literally ones of days!! time for more! this story is more addictive than yugi's pocky. (mmmmm... ananda leaves to go think dirty thoughts. o.O ) and btw, thx for not making anzu a total bitch. i don't like her with any of the bishies, but i don't think she's quite as bad as people like to think! ;) |
Reviewed By: hunter On: February 22, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP! i'm dying here, i wanna know what'll happen next! |
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