| "Muraki's Untitledness" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 17:09 CST
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It was nice to actually have a light, fluffy, humorous MxO fic. BIG SUPPORTER OF THAT COUPLE. They deserve an innocent fic.
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:16 CDT
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Lol! Lol! Lol! ^o^ that was so cute. I mean so funny too. I can understand the lemon part and I do agree with Oriya... shouldn't Muraki be an expert in that field? O.O ::swats away hentai thoughts:: Ahem... as for the 'pointless' self insertion Oriya had tried... @_@ What the hell is he talking about? @_@ Must be because there weren't names mentioned and it's sometimes hard to tell apart.
The last part was quite... @_@ Lol! Lol! Lol! Energetic... I mean a chibified Muraki who LOVES cuteness? Lol! Lol! Lol! This is quite a light fic to read ^-^ GREAT WORK!!! |
Reviewed By: Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:22 CDT
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OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS HILARIOUS!! ROFLMAO!! Simply adored it!! *is still giggling like mad* Oh my God...the YnM as authors...the idea rocks!! Love you for writing this!! |
Reviewed By: whatever On: June 27, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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yes... brunette can be used to describe males as well as females... however, if you want to find out the actually meaning to "brunette"... look it up in the dictionary... *nods* it doesn't necessarily mean that you have JUST brown hair... it involves having dark skin or brown eyes and brown hair, etc... something along those lines... (i have to check up on this myself actually...) anyways, rabid bunnies???? O_o that was... funny... ^_^ i like the idea of muraki/oriya... it's... cute... O_o whoa scary... muraki and cute in the same sentence... someone knock some sense into me now... *WHAM!!!* "OWWWWWWWWW!!! TSUZUKI... KNOCK IT OFF!!!" *whatever runs after a laughing tsuzuki while chasing after him with a butter knife* ^_^;;; eh heh... don't mind me... keep the stories coming!!! yay!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: June 18, 2003 20:54 CDT
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oh, this was GREAT! i laughed out loud several times while reading it! ^-^
i like this version of oriya and muraki, and woudn't have minded some action between the two.
you should write some more fics though, you're good! |
Reviewed By: Shiroki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 03:05 CDT
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brunette and brunet are both defined as (someone) having dark (pref brown) hair and/or eyes or skin, even. i was once quite startled to find Venom from Guilty Gear (white hair, cocoa skin) described as 'brunet' til i actually went and looked it up and found it valid ^^;; but brunet is more of reference towards guys, and brunette girls... like blond and blonde... and brunette tends to refer to one's hair more often than not... then again, i think both are pretty much available for general (all-encompassing XD) use... uhh ok. 'nuff'zanuff about that.
...i liked this fic! royally snickered and laughed my way through half of it and unabashedly grinned the other half away... damned cute. ^_^ love your imagination, haha ^_^ nice going! |
Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 17:25 CST
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This is such a cute fic! Good job. |
Reviewed By: Elf Asato [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 14:36 CST
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(yes, I am reviewing my own fic ^_^) I'm sure you all go look up brunnette for me XD! Hehe, anyway, thank you everyone! The comments are much appreciated! |
Reviewed By: lady_kaede On: February 19, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite fun! Brunette can be used for both males and females BUT it is the combination of dark brown hair AND brown eyes. Tsuzuki is not a brunette. |
Reviewed By: Fujimiya_Jai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 16:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
brunette, adj, is someone who has brown or dark brown hair. Brunette, noun, is a female with brown or dark brown hair. |
Reviewed By: Jule [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::gets a case of the giggles:: Cuuuute. ^_^ You would think Muraki would be the lemon-writing type... |
