|""A Broken Puzzle"" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]|
| Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 30, 2003 00:14 CST|
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
This is really good. great job. ^_^
| Title: vampirelips|
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 09:26 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
That is sooooo good. I loved the way you made yudis lover an unknown name. It was soo sweet!!!!!!! *^_^*
| Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 21:14 CST|
Awww, Yuugi-chan's so kawaii!!! X3 Hehehehe. I love that fic. And I'm jealous of Lizeth's drawing ability. ::sigh:: Ah, well. Um, I guess that's all the critiquing I can come up with this late at night. ^^;;; Heh. Ja, minna-chan.
| Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 09:37 CST|
That was really good. I liked it. It really fits in with the story.