| "TIme Waits For No Man" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Jzara On: July 07, 2003 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just wanted to thank all of you who read through this fic.It was so fun to write.I loved watching it come together myself!!How the story ties in to the series is amazing even to me.I truelly find this story hilarious too.My comedian side shows through alot.My favorite comment was about Goku sleeping. N-E-Way THX GUYS! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 20:32 CDT
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You little devil! You're just full of surprises aren't you! Fantastic! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I never saw that coming! Shame on you, Jzara, for reeling me in like that and then SLAM! That was so enjoyable. I really like how you explained one circumstance and then tossed in another one in for good measure. Bravo, kiddo! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now here is an idea that I haven't run across yet! I really like what you've done so far, Jzara, and the format didn't bother me in the least. If anything, it made the fic easy to follow, and since the hero was a little... disoriented, without this kind of format it would be easy to confuse the reader. I like your concept of how the heart virus might have come about; can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 18:15 CST
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This was not at all what I was expecting. It has a very unusual format, but it seems to work for you. The plot is wonderful and orginal. I am looking forward to the next installment! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 14:24 CST
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oooh, refreshing format. Very easy to read. I enjoyed this a lot!! :D |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 11:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start the girl almost reminds me of bowton lol keep up the good work and Ill read more. |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 21:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I think that you could do a lot better if the story wasnt in conversation format. |
Reviewed By: Jamz On: February 19, 2003 20:51 CST
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You do good work. Your conversations are set up easy so as for no confusion as to who said what. The idea is deffently original, and well devised. I can't wait to see more. |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 19:26 CST
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This fic is really good. I think that where you're going with it is great. I'll have to get used to the format though. ^_^() |
