| "Split Persona" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great inspit everything. I love this fic. keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Bluetiger1286 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had to do it didn't you. I knew you were going to. I'm so sad. Pan better not die. Or....... or otherwise Trunks will die too. Ha so there. It is a great story with lots of feeling put into it. I'm proud of you. I love you. |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooo much and i really hope you continue!!! I know how you feel, but why would you want a friend like that? I mean from the sounds of it she looks like a low life bitch(Excuse my langusge, but its true!) Anywayz your are wy better off without a person like that, and from the looks of it you sound like a good person and nice friend! SO DONT LET ANYONE PUT YOU DOWN!!! Well anywayz, please continue the story i love everything about it, and for everything i give you 10, alright. update soon!!!!
Yuffie Lockheart AKA The Baddist Chick(but only in some cases! ^-^) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow pure and simple that was great |
Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 09:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good chapter as usual. Please don't kill Pan! Or revive her with the dragonballs. Don't let it there: you HAVE to finish this.
And don't let personnal stuff put you down. I don't know all those people and either of the situation, but I do know that there's fierce blow sometimes in live and that you shouldn't let that kill you. It's hard I know, but you got to have at least ONE person to whom you can talk of all this. Maybe it'll make you feel better, I sure hope so for you. Good luck. |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 07:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got to update !!! This is so good ! |
Reviewed By: Zungda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you keep writing and updating, I can't wait for the next chapter. It was funny how you spelt Goku wrong. Anyways good stuff keep writing. |
Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 11:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahhh... love the story (and the pairing!). But you really are evil for making such clifhangers all the time and such short chapters! Please write more soon. Oh, and please don't be too hard on Pan. Wouldn't want her scared for life. And would that change Vegeta's perception of his son?!? |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good loved it and I hope that up keep this up good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you had problems too. well anyway I love this fic and that was a great cliffhanger. Keep up the good work |
