| "Faulty Reasoning" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 17:47 CDT
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LOL. I had to laugh. It's was funny. LMAO. I just kept giggling and laughing through pretty much the whole thing. LOL. Keep up the good work and please update soon. LOL
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Reviewed By: Fallen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 03:21 CDT
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This story has been on my favorite's list for awhile, and recently I've read it again, and fell in love with it again. ^^ Only problem I have is no updates! Its been (if nearly) a year since the last new chapter, and I am very eager to read more! Hope someday you write more, this was and will be one of my favorite Yugi slashes (if not my fav slash) ever and I'd hate to see it die part-way through.
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, a scared and clingy Joey is very adorable. I can't wait for the next update. ^-^ btw, you could use an editor, no offense intended. Great fic. XD You write Ryou really interestingly.
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 19:42 CST
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hmmm okay seems like somebody has used my username on here... believe me i didn't write that previous review!!! i would prove it but i can't soooo whoever that bitch is using my name can just die!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: October 29, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i geuss i was wrong about the fic it has turned out very bad there is no action so now i think it sucks i just love yuri and yaoi and you havent given it to me need them y wont u write them yuo fuckin bitch!!!!!????!!!! if you wont i will take the story u r writting right now and make it better cuz this a one sucks now i will put alot of yaoi and yuri in it whore so you fucking remember if you dont put that in i am gonna take your story and JOEY IS MINE u fucking bitch ass cunt whore!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I agree with joeysgal. (although I don't agree thats she's Joey's gal, he is mine!) I began this story with the hope of alota lemon and here I am 5 chapters plus a prologue later nothing! Gimme some action! You didn't even describe any of the y/yy scene. Love the funnies in this though.
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Reviewed By: Bobble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 17:27 CST
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There are soo many funny parts i couldn't breathe!! But i have to admit... for some reason the thing that sent me over the edge was the silverware inccident... No clue why! SOOO FUNNY!!!!!!! UPDATE SOOON!!!!!
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 27, 2003 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you wrote more!!!! If you ever need more of my cheerleading, just lemme know! ^_^ zoey_joey@yahoo.com
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Title: I need you to need me...
Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 00:32 CST
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So kawaii! Poor widdle Jou, needing comfort from Ryou. So it looks like it's working out between them. What does Ryou need his awfully picky yami for anyway? Well, please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal can't login too hard lol On: October 26, 2003 21:06 CST
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Aww that was so cute!! But a little short, mind you. i love Jou/Ryou coupling stories, I've only read one and it was REALLY good. This is the second one I've read and I can't wait for some more stuff to happen in it! Keep up the good work girl. Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^______^ ciao!
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 20:47 CDT
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Hmmm.... Seto's in a bad mood. But he's usually so cheerful!
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Title: too lazy to login
Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: October 19, 2003 21:51 CDT
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I love this fic. It's in my top 5 list!!! Maaaannn when is there gonna be any goooood lemon scenes? I'm hanging by the skin of my teeth here!! Keep it up though!! ^________^
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Title: tease!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 17, 2003 08:54 CDT
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Ah, you teaser!! You better write more soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Bakuraluva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 21:59 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this. Totally not run of the mill! I like your characters and your style. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 14, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great. Please hurry an update Chow Babe ;)
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