| "Stranger of the Duel" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 11:09 CST
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That was such a sad ending!! *sniff sniff* But hey...CONGRATULATIONS!! You finished your fic!! I was kinda hoping for a ...happier ending, but eh. And the plot wasn't that confusing...although I thought Cali needed all the Millennium items? Meh, maybe I missed something along the way. I'm very forgetful of details, you know... ;) I can't wait for the sequel! This story was actually pretty good. I like your writing style- simple and easy to read. Not confusing (and no, I'm not just saying that to be nice- it's the truth). I think you should definitely continue writing fanfics. Your ideas are intersting as well. Ok, I'm gonna stop now, before this review gets any longer. Congratulations again, and AWESOME job!!
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 18:11 CDT
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Grr...cliffhanger! Heh heh. Nice chapter anyways. Nothing wrong with it being short. Kinda adds to the..drama, I guess. Heh heh. Continue please! ;)
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 01:01 CDT
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YUCK! Cali had to the kiss the guard to get in? Poor Cali! Wny not just..knock him out with a spell or something? And good ol' Kaiba the work-a-holic. Again. Well, nice chapter! You should have told me you updated, and I would have read it earlier! Well, hmm..update soon! Yes yes yes...I'm writing already.
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Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 14:36 CDT
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Nice chapter title! And awesome chapter too. So Cali is ready to battle huh? Cool..she gets more powers now.
Aww..poor lonely Kaiba though. Gotta feel a tad bit sorry for him. Well, at least he's "happy" I suppose...
YAY! KEEP WRITING! ;) |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 17:51 CDT
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YAY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!! And sooner than you originally told me too...Anyways, this chapter was cool! Still feel a bit sad for Kaiba though...gosh is he mopey sometimes! But yeah, Cali rocks! And yes, her diary *does* need to be updated as soon as the site is working again. WRITE WRITE WRITE!! |
Title: Blah. *I'M* Cali's best friend.
Reviewed By: Lillers On: September 03, 2003 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on. Like you expected less than a ten.
Pfft. You still rock.
And my endings just keep getting blunterer and blunterer... X_X
keep it up.
And you so have more reviews than me. I is jealous. >:P |
Reviewed By: Alli! On: September 03, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I didn't rate it all cuz we all know its straight 10s. GREAT stuff Lena, I love how you did short pieces of what everyone was doing at the same time for the last chapter, made it like REALLY exciting. As a whole, this story couldn't be better, and I don't know the first thing about fanfics but I still love reading your stuff. I hope you keep it up, I'll talk to you in like five seconds, woohoo!!! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 21:00 CDT
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tick tock to you too. I'm workin', I'm workin'!
*french accent* You cannot rush ze masterpiece, or she will not be considered ze mastery of ze piece! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i poked steffs to read this, she lurved it too. |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 26, 2003 18:34 CDT
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So Cali finally learns about Calliope's past, and Seto is still...sulking, more or less. Heh heh. Poor guy. He still has no clue on what's going on, huh? This story is getting VERY interesting now. You better continue! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, you still rock.
^^;
I love this fic to bits and pieces. |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so awesomey. Keep on truckin', story's coming along in a most loverly fashion.
(PS! THIS IS REVIEW THIRTEEN! Do I get anything for being unlucky?) |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 07, 2003 09:50 CDT
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aww...I wanna find out what Calliope was in the past...DANG IT! Stupid cliff hangers...heh heh...post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Alli On: July 06, 2003 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I absolutely LOVE it! The only thing I would change is that you write more, lol, I will be awaiting the next chapter!!! (and it better be here soon!) |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 04, 2003 00:37 CDT
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Yeah, this is me, I just forgot to log in. So Cali and BAKURA are now working together? Eh? How odd...But anyways, cool chapter. Poor Seto though...heh heh...please continue! |
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