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| "Tails of Troubles" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 06:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bleugh...damn computer wouldn't let me review for ages. ::waves:: Heya, lovely fic. I haven't read so many yummy pairings in ages, finding fics with Vejita/Trunks (that are also well written) are like trying to find gold dust. Mind you, I also love Goku/Gohan/Goten and all combination thereof just as much as I adore T/V. Actually, I don't think there are many pairings I *don't* like..it mainly depends on how well the story has been written, ya know? As for your flamers...*snicker*...I read out their flames and your responses to my partner. He's not keen on yaoi, but he has no problem helping me find good yaoi sites and pics. He thought the flames were hilarious too, I mean, come on...to have read so far then just *now* decide you don't like the subject matter? Hah! Sheesh...I bet they were dropped on their heads when they were kids. ::decides to point out that this has no bearing whatsoever on Goku's cute character:: *snerk* Some people have serious problems, especially if they can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality. Anyway...I didn't mean to babble, sorry 'bout that. Right, I'm going to go finish reading the rest of this excellent tale. More fool them if they cannot enjoy your wonderful imagination. Hugs, ~Shi-koi~
| Reviewed By: Henley On: January 02, 2004 12:12 CST
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Oh, and don't worry about what that retard said about you writing a rape scene. You definately did not write a rape scene.
| Reviewed By: Henley On: January 02, 2004 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic! I never really liked Incest, but technaically its not, if this is Mirai Trunks and Vegeta? Still, even if its not Mirai Trunks, i've always loved yaoi, so keep writing! Love it! Chameleon
| Reviewed By: Myself On: June 08, 2003 19:06 CDT
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Yay! Im so happy that its T/Gt and V/G in the end! Thats the way I love it. I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! It almost makes me cry! ::sniff:: So, seeing as I'm not going to bother rating the fic the normal way, they are all 11s just so you know and all. AH! I LOVE IT! | Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
** jumps up and down with tears in eyes** NOT only was there a hentai in almost every chapter but there was an actual plot. IT WAS SOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!! DAMN U!! please write another one.. ** grinns**make it more detailed though...heh heh heh ....juicey stuff yeah no..anwyays it was awsome I was actually crying lol | Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 13:39 CST
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*screams happily and glomps u*
THAT WAS AWESOME! PERFECT! WONDERFUL! YOU RULE!!
*dances around like the moron she is*
I can't WAIT to read your one shot sequals!! *runs off to read them, giggling and yipping in excitement* | Reviewed By: 2 disgusted readers On: March 15, 2003 03:10 CST
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We've just finished reading this filth, and are both absolutely disgusted! It is so wrong! First of all, Vegeta would NEVER rape his own son! He is a Saiyajin, and he lives by his code of honor! He has too much honor and pride to touch his own son. That's disgusting! Besides, he loves Bulma! Have you ever watched the show? It's so obvious! And Goku would NEVER act like you have made him act! He's the saviour of the world! He's not some lust crazed gay freak who'd just as soon kill Trunks to have sex with Vegeta! He LOVES CHI CHI! And she loves him! She's just a misunderstood character! She's a wonderful wife and mother who just acts the way she does because she needs attention that she never gets! And WORST of all, Trunks and Goten are BEST FRIENDS! They aren't in love with each other! Have you seen GT? What about Palace? Goten is on the phone with girls all the time! Besides, he's so damn stupid, he probably doesn't even know what sex is. You should have LET him kill himself. Can't stand Goten. ~pokes author with pointy stick, before grabbing Poopsie's hand and skipping off merrily into the sunset, content in the knowledge that they've made Jady-chan's day by flaming her~ | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I said before ! Good work ^o^ Sooo Intersesting to read never ever gets boriging *luckyme*
Tank Girl | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWeee ! If I like it ? You bet I did *hentaigrin*
Keep up the good work *pleeease* I'm really enjoying it soooo much !
Tank Girl | Reviewed By: Seremira On: March 11, 2003 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't take it personally, I frighten everyone... hee hee... Anyway.. cool chapter. Vejita SSJ3!!!!!
But does that mean no more father/son bonding(and bondage?) I'm sad. Keep up the awesome work and I still think that you are psychotic... all good authors are. Smut and Kink Rule!! | Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought I'd be able to sit through an incest fic without puking or at least feeling morally filthy, but in your skillful hands, I'm just as comfy here as I am in front of a good ol' fashioned het fic. Of course, that would mean subjecting myself to envisioning Vejita with that self-absorbed hell bitch of his. Blech. I just wanted to let you know that I have truly enjoyed this entire series and look forward the next two installments. ('Cuz I'm a kinky little fucker too!) And as far as those dipshit flamers go (yes, I always read AN's) they're too spineless to back up their opinions in the heat of an open debate. I have yet to find a flamer brave enough to leave behind an email address. They're like terrorist suicide bombers: narrow-minded glory seekers with a lack of enough guts to make a good splatter. You're developing quite the following here, and I think it's obvious your fans won't be scared of what the little zealots think of them. March on, Jady, we've got your back. ^_^
And bring on the SMUT! | Reviewed By: Seremira On: March 08, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only are you a crazy, yaoi, incest-obesessed,sick bitch, you are an original one at that!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Stella On: March 08, 2003 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, so all the Saiyans and demi-Saiyans are gay? What are the odds of that happening? Not only are they gay, but practice incest? Oh, come on! I quite enjoy yoai, kinky, whatever, but this is silly. Not only that, all the women are unreasonable, cold hearted bitches! Geeze what a wanker you are! Seriously, incest? That's low. | Reviewed By: Desiivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jady,
I am a HUGE fan of your work. I have written almost all of your work so far. Just the addition of your pen name will prompt me to read it.
I used to not read author's comments, only the formal headings Title, warnings, rating… so on. But, now I always do you really need to get a heads up about the story. Theses are very important in understanding the story. I can't see how people could over pass them it’s how I tell if I am gonna enjoy the story or not.
I had to reread the “rape Scene” I didn’t see it a such.
I read what you wrote about “Any Pairings” The comment you made about hating Gohan, Your two Stories “Crowned Evil” & “Warui No Ou” can clearly show this to a point however I LOVED the ending of that story.
I too am a huge “Truten fan” as such I have a hard time buying Trunks involved with anyone but, Goten. {Keeping my fingers crossed you go that way}
I most certainly hate the pairing of Trunks with Vegeta, but like I said, before I will read anything with your name on it and have yet to dislike anything so far. Your work carries it’s own, besides all that this is your fic. Your creativity created it, therefore it’s your choice in the content. I am more then eager to see what you are gonna come up with.
~*IVY*~ | Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 06:44 CST
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nice one jady! And yes i actually DO read the authors thingys! So there, not EVERYBODY skimms them!! HAHA! Well anyway... will there be MORE?? I really hope for MORE! PUL-ESE? I will help u track dowm enery flamming skimmer if you make MORE!! | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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