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"Loser" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ]
 Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2006 00:18 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
poor matt!
 Reviewed By: lonely_girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2005 00:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting, a little unusual, especially with the short and pointed sentances, but very amusing
 Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2005 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok I received a review from you on a story called Final Fantasy:The Ultimate Quest and you titled it 'Just us boys' and I`m sure ou meant it to go to someone else.
 Reviewed By: Daughter of storms [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 05, 2004 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well... No really sure on how to rate this... I mean, It was a great story. Just, well, yeah... to close to home for comfort. The way it was written, with the short sentences, the overly obvious statements, made it funny as hell. Yet, still somehow very disturbing. Not in a bad way though... Good disturbing. Very entertainingly so. Good that you have mad this a one shot... It would most probably have lost it's sting if it wasn't. You know that you're great with characters, right?
 Reviewed By: Ophelia Revived [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 01, 2004 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
How do I describe? Granny-slappin' good with a bold Office Space flavor, a lingering after taste of Dilbert, and a hint of whimsy. Like a fine, dry wine that skips the getting me drunk part and goes straight to the making me laugh part. You speak an honest truth: with a nice smile and a great rack, you could walk up to any leather-clad biker and jovially ask, "Hey, aren't you Richard Simmons?" Bravo.
 Reviewed By: Aine  On: April 23, 2004 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was so much fun to read. I'm already a huge fan of "This Can't Be Good" (you write the best Miroku in all fanfictiondom, and I'm really picky) and in this little oneshot you again made use of your obvious knack for character. The simplistic language and uber-short sentences helped play up the humor of the piece. While this would get old in a longer work, it worked beautifully here. Interesting how you used near to no pronouns, always referring to the characters by name. It makes me automatically equate each character's personality with their name, as I read. Cool effect.
 Title: ouch... it is cynical.
Reviewed By: dreamcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2003 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa... I like it. Sad though... Usually I don't read originals, cause a lot of times they are crap, but I've read some of your other stories (pretty sure I reviewed them too) and I like your style. Humor is so hard to write well... This fic's nice cause it's one of those things that make you think, which is a nice change from a lot of stuff you read on fanfic sites. I really like the use of line breaks, makes the thing flow a little creepier, shows what you're trying to draw attention to.
 Reviewed By: Fox  On: July 03, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was sooooooooooooooooo funny! It was great!!
 Reviewed By: Mabelle [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
The style of this story was very interesting, I like it alot. The story itself stirs pity in my heart. I've known one too many Matts, truly, they hear what people call them, even if it is hidden in conversation subliminally.
 Reviewed By: TigerQueen14 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 03, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ouch.

The "enjoyment factor" got lower marks only because it was kind of...painful? No one seemed to have any redeaming features...except, maybe, for Matt (who at least tries). Yet it was all incredibly well-written and very interesting. The repetition was used perfectly -- it's almost psychopathic, somehow. We all come tumbling down...

I liked it. It's kind of like staring at a car wreck...but I liked it. Hmm.

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