| "Two Heart Combine" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: SakuraStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2002 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay!!!new chapter!!^^come 2 think of it, i only have one teeny weeny little complaint:the grammer!!!*sobs*it really ruins the fic. *flees from the angry author* |
Reviewed By: Amber On: February 13, 2002 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing!!! You are a true writer!!! Though sometimes it takes me a while to figure out what the heck they just got through saying. In other words, please work on your grammar. Other than that it's a GREAT story!!^_^ Keep up the good work, 'cause you got one heck of an imagination!!!! Your my new role model, 'cause I wanna be a writer when I grow up!!! Your just too amazin' so don't listen ta writer-wannabe's, and keep on writing!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: angel On: January 25, 2002 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I tink it'a a wonderful story...but onlu read a few chapter..I"m on chapter 14 right now..I hope i can finish it...i ralli like this story ...so keep writing..heheh... |
Reviewed By: Kero-Chan On: March 15, 2002 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was THe GREATEST FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER
READ!!!
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Otaku_hime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2001 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I keep forgetting to review... *hits herself over the head* I usually procastrinate, but for the last little while, my computer keeps going weird too. What can I say? You already know that I think you're good at writing these kind of stories that are just so incredibly fantastic!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2001 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, keep writing, its heaps different from what i thought it would be, i reckon touya and sakura should find out that they are brother and sister :P |
Reviewed By: sweet_lilgirl On: November 21, 2001 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic, more, more, more! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: November 17, 2001 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
love the story, write more |
