| "Newton's Third" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Yuki Mouto 8X12 On: November 14, 2003 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update ok! I wanna see if Yami and Kaiba get married. They would make a good married couple! ;) Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune's Hikari On: November 13, 2003 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i shut my yami out for awile I just wanna say I love this story and since today is my yami's 'death day' so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 12, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God i loved this story. Me and my hikari really want you to continue. PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE CONTINUE!!! Shut up Hikari. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 14:05 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY! more angst! I love this story, it is so kawaii! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far! Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 09:14 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- continue continue continue!!!!!!!!! It is NOT nice to leave some ome in suspense!!!!!!
YPP- /voice full of wonder/ I think she's gonna explode...
HPP- her face is getting that red tint to it.
YPP- she must've really liked that story...
HPP- /nods slowly/
YPP- you think we oughta get out of here before she turns on us...?
HPP- /nods again/ |
