Reviewed By: Rei On: March 04, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute fic! please continue. maybe try to flesh the story out a little with some nice descriptions and background details... |
