| "VeNdEtTa Of ThE hEaRt" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 11:26 CDT
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Nooooooooo I can't believe you left it there, gosh what a fascinating exiting story, The electricity between Bulma and Vegeta is mind-blowing. This story is incredible as well as uniquely original.
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Title: ch1
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 07:57 CDT
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What a story, you skilfully depict the searing passion between Bulma and Vegeta, so potent, like an uncontrollable force which the characters have no say over. I also found the witty banter very amusing, as each character tried to get the upper hand.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this is an awesome story... If you ever pick it up again I do believe I will happily be reading it...
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Title: siiiiigh...
Reviewed By: Brit (the same from waaay back) On: January 25, 2004 22:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Welp...it's been 8 months to the day since I last came by, pleading for a new chapter. Still bookmarked. Still drop in to see if there's something new. Still hoping. Guess I should stop though now. Waste of time. Waste of space in my favorites list. Waste of talent though, is what it is...If I read it all again with so many months between, sometimes it's like I'm reading it for the first time again. Exciting. But then I remember bits and pieces, and each time it's not quite as exciting as the last... Damn shame, all the crap and smut out there on the web gets so many reviews, and work like yours goes by seemingly unnoticed. But I noticed. And it was great. Just wish there had been more and that you hadn't given it up. What do I know? Maybe you went on to better things. I know lots of writers and artists and people with talent like yours who go off to prestigious colleges to make something of themselves and find they no longer have time to update at the whim of a few fans. More important things to do. If you ever come back to this old archive of your forgotten stories, I hope you read this note and know that you were appreciated. Know that your fans wish you the best of luck in all your endeavors. Was that too mushy? Ho, vell. I'll shut up now.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is...WOW. This has got to be the most well written story that I have EVER read! The witty dialogue, the way you can keep the story flowing, and the way you develop the characters is just magnificent. I can not wait until your next chapter and I'll also be looking out for any of your other fics. Thank you for being such a great writer and putting your work on MM.
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Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 06:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I agree with Brit...where are you? This is such a wonderfully written story, great description and flow.....I would so love to see more of your work.
Write more soon!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Brit On: May 25, 2003 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, there...ummmm...it's been kind of a long while since you last updated...you still alive? I hope you haven't given up on the story! O_O It's too good to just drop and let dust collect!!! Please, tell me it isn't so. I love it too much to never see the end ;_; You're such a good writer, and you've got such a wonderfully original plot goin' on here. DON'T STOP NOW! |
Reviewed By: Anime_angel_05 On: April 06, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thsi is a great fic!! It kept me on the edge of my seat as I read!! It is highly original and much better than what some people write here!! Bravo! I hope you will continue to work on this fic and I'm looking forward to your next update!! |
Reviewed By: Brit On: March 27, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. Absolutely amazing. I LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 05:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Fantastic! Please please write more....I am really enjoying this story - it's well written very descriptive and , oh did I mention that I want more? Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 17:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story....loving it |
Reviewed By: person On: March 18, 2003 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
and again...there isn't any update though you post as if there is... |
Reviewed By: person On: March 06, 2003 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
uh..it said you updated and you..didn't. *scratches back her head and walks away mumbling stuff* |
Reviewed By: maiyuan02 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me like! me like! |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: March 02, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! Love the part about banshees and demons not being allowed into heaven it definately refers to Chi-Chi and perfectly mirrors Vegeta's personality. Vegeta...a womanizer...OF COURSE!!! |
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