| "A Disaster Play" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: OOshatiElf On: July 16, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muttered Kaiba as he was brushing...brushing?! I will reiterate myself...spellcheck is our friend! Is English your first language? If it is not then I can understand...but if it is your first langauge, then God save us all.
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: OoshatiElf On: July 16, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the worst fics I have ever read.
Your grammar and spelling are horrible!
Instead of the title being Disaster Play,
it should be Disaster English. Yamo?
But I do have to say that this story gave
my friends and I funny quotes. My advice BETAREADER!
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: Taffy On: July 11, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
The reasons behind my ratings are as follows:
Take some kind of course in English, please. This whole fic sounds like you had to look at a something-to-English-dictionary for every other word. The plural of "woman" is "women", among other things.
Also, the plot is lacking... kind of lame. When you're working with "The Sleeping Beauty" (where all the characters are female) and "Yu-Gi-Oh" (where all the characters are male)... you're trying to make humor out of it, I think, but crossing over those two just doesn't work out.
On the other hand, I have been enjoying this; it's so bad it's hilarious. Please write more, so I can keep laughing myself to death over it.
Well, I'm sorry! I can't bring myself to give a glowing review to an awful fanfic. |
Reviewed By: sprinket On: June 29, 2003 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tat was so funni but mabe a bit more grammer but tat doesnt mean i don wanna c next chap |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! that was so cool! you gotta update this! OH FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SAINE PLZ UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol... Looking at the reviews I notice Dark Lady Setsuna complaining about spelling errors. Maybe she should check her own "speling" first. Anyway, I like your story so far! The plot is very original and funny. Hehehe, just wondering, but do Kaiba and Joey end up falling for each other? That would be cute although a bit predictable I guess. Well I'm looking forward to more chapters! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cruel. I really really liked this. Poor Yami Bakura is so dead when Seto and Joey get their hands on him. Anyway I can't wait for the next part. |
Reviewed By: Shashomiru On: March 01, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hah.That was so funny.Especially, because Joey is my favorite character and..(looks at fingers:Joey,Marik,Seto,Bakura--)~_~;Oh wait.Seto is my third favorite character--I think.(Starts counting on fingers again.); (Gets lost in happy place thinking of more ideas for my story)Oh yeah.So anyway I'm a really good artist.But do you need a scanner--anyone?Natsume Nara. ~Shashomiru~ ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
OH THAT'S BAAAD! ^_^ CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ that was really good!! keep writing although i caught a few speling errors they kinda bug me so could you be more care ful plz? ^_^ i like how kiaba is the princess i would have thought joey would be it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that is so evil. Joey as the prince and Seto as the Princess talk about original. I can't wait for the next part. |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 28, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this! Write more. and the witches name starts with an M. Sorry I forgot the name. Just know that! Oh and it is Sleeping Beauty. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: February 28, 2003 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I though it was funny when Joey found out who the female led was. The evil Witch is Maleficent. Keep writing it is good from what I have read. Update as soon as you can. |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ he found out!! he he i love where this is going so update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: March 01, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this! Write more! |
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