| "Living with a Vampire" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have a great time reading this... i am glad that you finish them all and i was able to finish reading them in a hour... and once again, love your fic!
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Reviewed By: YamiBFanGurl On: July 19, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute story, but it was kinda rushed at the ending. And you could have added more detail, like what they were wearing, what the place they were at looked like. I wanted yaoi or atleast some angst, but I guess I'm not going to get that from a PG rating am I ^^;
Some of it was illogical. Like why on earth would the Vampire Lord wait a half hour for them to power up, when he could kill Yuugi in seconds, or escape easily. Another thing, why did Yami and the others trust what the Vampire Lord said? He could have just lied and killed Yuugi right when they left.
I'm not flaming, this is just constuctive critcism ^^
Overall, it's a good story, but it could be better ~_^ |
Reviewed By: 13795 On: June 19, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
too rushed |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great cliffhanger! I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens next! Great job with the story so far. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 08:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad your updating. I'm also glad you introduced Seto. Ineresting. Please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: Diamond On: March 18, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Diamond On: March 08, 2003 10:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, keep going. |
Reviewed By: LO-LO On: March 06, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story!!!!!! keep up the good work!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: K. Sapphire On: March 06, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story was very cute and good for a first timer. I would really enjoy if you finished the story. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting so far. I want 2 no more. THAT EVIL ****ER PEGASUS BETTER NOT HURT YUGI!!! |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting. More! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooooooooh! PLEZ Continue! NO YAOI!!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quite gud so far. Was the one outside Bakura? Is there going 2 b yaoi in this story? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this is pretty good. I hope you do post more. I'll look forward to it. |
