| "Cartoons v. Real People" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Tye On: October 09, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right an epiloge please so i can finally kill yami. Tye
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: dijonea On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the funniest thing that I have ever read really made me laugh c ya' |
Reviewed By: lusciousdragon On: July 30, 2003 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ow... My head hurts, not to be mean or anything, but your story, it's good, the very CORE plot is good, but it's really confusing with all the characters, if you're going to do a story with the whole ancient Egypt past thing, (I don't know, didn't read whole thing) then you shouldn't have so many characters, cut the unimportant characters, the uneccesary dialogue, and the confusing random stuff. I truly think you're getting in way over your head, I think you have a good CORE plot, but just cut the unneccessary things. This story has enough for two, what might have been a little better, would be to have made one story with your friends and yu-gi-oh, and the other with you bakura andMarik, and Yami, and w/e. But this is just my honest opinion, I'm not being mean, and you don't have to listen to me, this is just what I think. |
Reviewed By: Tyefood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic but Alex can you include me in the story. |
Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good so far just one question...........WHY AM I GOING TO DIE?!?!?!?!? AND GIVE MY WEAPONS BACK!!! well can i at least threaten them with sith lightning or something please!!!! i said i wanted to save the world or do something heroic!!! come on please!!! |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good, BUT IT WAS TOO SHORT DANGET!! but it was stil good. requier more that i do! |
Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really nice work, i do hope you update it soon! |
Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
oh and i forgot one other thing, if anyone in the fic comes on to me ill try to cut them up with my double sided lightsaber or just shock them to death!!
bye! and update soon, your fic's getting good! |
Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PUT ME IN!!!!!!
DESCRIPTION
i wear all black plus my hair is too
also i have a double sided green lightsaber, oh i can use sith lightning, you know the ability to shoot blue lightning from my hands whenever i want.
im very rebellious. i only do things when i want to
CAN I PLEASE SAVE THE WORLD FROM THE CARTOONS I BEG OF YOU I HAVE TO BE KNOWN FOR SOMETHING!!! if not can i save them but die in the process?
its your decision, my e-mail is maujinvader@yahoo.com see ya later! |
Reviewed By: Laura (Tye) On: March 22, 2003 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Alex, both your stories are great so i give a ten for everything. |
Reviewed By: KittyCatz(2) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok.... you know It's only fair if u put me in! All leather or pleather(2 match Yami)...halter shoes...bandanna belt..Attitude.... sexy, mysterious and lovable.(ok I know it is me but these are my friends and had their internet privilages cut off, so they gave me their revews... and I'm posting them. Cause I want to, ok. So don't think I'm doing this for myself and I'm a scitz, cause I aint! Just wantin to clear it up.)Keep it up and post this rewiew! Hun, 1 review? POST IT! AND DIJ'S... YOU PPL R PITIFUL NOT TO REVIEW. AND I DON'T CARE IF IT SHOWS UP THAT IT WAS KIT. I WASN'T.... IT WAS ME! SO THERE! BYE!
lastly,
I THINK YAMI IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!
Kit should know, I tell her every chance I get!
Kit: Don't I know it. And I think u r sooooooooooo wierd... Marik & Bakura rock! 'Cause they tried to steal his power! I also still like Ryou and Malik. So.... there back 2 u! |
Reviewed By: KittyCatz(2) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You put me in it now gurl! Hey I'm Dij the hot heaed in Escape From Darkness! I am a hot head and u know it! My clothes? Purple or leather, but no purple leather. Call me! Bye! |
Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: March 03, 2003 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont understand ur story when i read it. I think u should read other stories and write like they do. I just dont get yours the way u write it
doesn't make ince. But its creative and fun when u think about it |
