| "Beings of hatred and love." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: blu saneda On: March 05, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Off to a good start in my book. Iori does have that cool laugh, everyone should laugh like him.
Is Akane blind or what she couldn't tell that that wasn't Ranma? Guess they have a good reason for not telling Ranma about his brother. Always do enjoy a good fighting fic and yours is definitly a good one. |
Reviewed By: blu saneda On: March 05, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wanted to know what happen at the Tendo's. Wanted to know the deep dark secrets and some violences.
Wanted to read about Genma getting fried or blown up something. A couple of words here and there misspelled. Nothing to big. Are Ranma and his brother going to be pair in the Tournament together? If so whose going to be the third member? Any scouts entering the tournament? Other members from the wrecking crew?
Got a good chuckle from the Popeye's part. Did someone control the weather for them to get to the base or what? Anyway maybe your clear up some of my question in the next chapter. |
