| "Ordinary Things" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: yamimylove [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
hey carine!! well i thougt(don't know is thats well spelled hehe) anyway i wanted to know your e-mail so i can send you part 7 of my story the affair hope you remember.. anyway since you liked that much back then, i wanted to know if you want it or not.. well i already make this a long review hehe.. well about your story, i loved it hehe see ya!!
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Reviewed By: luna On: July 18, 2003 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like this fic a lot so far. demo...(but) you said "mochi mochi" wrong. it's actually "moshi moshi". Mochi is a snack. |
Reviewed By: ??? On: July 17, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI! SUGOI NE! (Trans: It's really good!) Please continue. Your grammer is okay. The mistakes are fine and understandable. I love this story please continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Svetla Noel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO.......... What happens next? |
Reviewed By: agasa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Are you teasing me? Your a way better writer than
I am. Its great all you bozo's reading this review
get the hell away write your own review for this
fic before you read mine. And if you haven't read
it start reading. Sorry I don't understand French.
But are you French? |
Reviewed By: Kaori On: March 07, 2003 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it's very short--but I'm quite curious about what will happen next... unfortunatly I dont know french. |
