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"I DARE YOU!" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ]
 Reviewed By: Sonja Edachi  On: May 26, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Me and Jake have a dare each, both for Tea. Sonja's: I dare tea to undo Seto's shirt while in a lip-lock with him.(Just the shirt.) Jake's: to take off her top and sit on Yami's lap.Sonja: I still think that's gross!! Jake: Oh, and the partial make-out isn't?!?!
 Title: HAHAHAHAHA*Gasp* HAHAHAHAHA!
Reviewed By: ;::Dark&Light::;  On: May 10, 2005 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*Gasp* HAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! DIE TEA! BWAHAHAHAH! *Stops laughing after a hour or so* Okay, sorry 'bout that, Tea fans. That so funny! Please countinue! Oh yeah, I got some ideas for the fic! Tristan-To sing the most embarassing song while wearing a bunny suit with a tutu. Joey-To act like a dog in a doggie suit for 5 mins. Bark, eat dog food, lick someone, walk on all fours ect. Mai-To kiss Yami Bakura for 5 minutes while nude. Yugi-To dress and act like a girl. Yami-To get stuck with Yami Marik while locked in a padded room for a hour or so. Bakura-To lock and act like a girl just like Yugi, and make them do something like, skip through a bunch of pretty flowers in tutus. Ummmmmmmmm, I'm out of ideas.... I'd apreciate it if you put one or so up... Make the next one really really funny! Good luck I'll be cherring for you! *Is holding a big cherring flag and is waving it* Ja ne! ^.^
 Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2005 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
More description needed so the fic makes sense. A plot needed so the fic isn't pointless. Characterisation needed so it feels realistic. I'm so tired of lazy, pointless fan fics like this that I can't be bothered to write any more criticism. Just put a little effort in to it next time. In fact this review is just a copy of the last one I wrote. That's how tired I am of these half-assed fics.
 Reviewed By: amethyst_rose1993  On: December 08, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hee Hee die Anzu! That was great! Can you make Joey skip around in a pink dress! *Evil laugh* That last chapter was really funny! Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Samantha J.C  On: December 29, 2003 02:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
heheh poor Anzu....anyways I have a dare for every ones favorite tomb robber. Bakura I dare you to dye your hair pink,put on a hot pink leotard and tutu, and sing Oppse I did It Agen. heheh um and I will be hiding some were in the audience to take a picture so smile! I feel so mean hehehe
 Reviewed By: MaujinVader [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 22, 2003 15:06 CST
Comment/Review:
out of pure hatred i dare YAMI to put on mascara(probably spelled it wrong but i dont care) where a pnik tu tu and run around singing marry had a little lamb while people take pictures of him and ship all over the world!!!!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ALL FEAR MAUJINVADER!!!!!


ps: if yami refuses ill come in and shoot him with a high powered paint ball gun!!!!
 Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 17, 2003 11:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Here's one for ya! Uh...*forgets*...wait...Oh! Based off another fic I've read tickle tourcher *can't spell* Bakura, Yami, or Marik from their Abious! ^^
 Reviewed By: Bunny-chan  On: March 14, 2003 23:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mwahaha!! Let's see... what evil should the YGO cast go through? Hmm...OK, first of, please don't kill Tea, those fix get really old... second, I have some ideas:

*Yami: sing some random wannabe (remix? parody?) egyptian song and wear really ghetto egyptian outfit! ^_^ (man's outifit or woman's...)
*Yugi: uh... well... you could dress him up as a girl I suppose...even though Mokuba did that in the show... (that was amusing...)
*Joey: *evil grin* I know some guys like him... I've dared them to walk around on the street nude before. They did it. But the dare was only for 5 mins. they did it for 15...
*Mai: Come onto stage the way she would look in the morning!! I like her, but she always looks good!! What does she look like when she has just woke up?
*Tea: I don't know..I'm a Tea fan so this is difficult... maybe stick her in the padded room with somebody that really annoys her for a while.. (or somebody from THIS world that annoys everyone... like Bob Dole... or Bush.) (Most americans will get that...)
*Bakura: I would say a date w/ somebody really awfull... like Britney Spears... or worse. I don't really hate any characters in YGO, but that would be amusing... poor Bakura...
*YBakura: UH.... no clue...
*Tristan: Dunno... possibly a double date with Serenity and Miho? That would be odd..

OK, I'm drained off all ideas (or thoughts for that matter.) But please keep writing!! ^_~ (Ice??) ^_^;;
 Reviewed By: Serphyona [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2003 19:49 CST
Comment/Review:
i dare YAMI bakura to kiss joey. heheh good fic
 Reviewed By: Lady Lynx [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I dare Yami (Who I, for some odd reason, don't like. He annoys me) to try to seduce Yami Bakura. You can trap Bakura in a (padded) room and stick Yami in there with him. It should be interesting.
 Reviewed By: Ki Ki  On: March 06, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
heres one...
dare Taya to ...
jump off a 900' cliff!
i know its a lil lame but
...I HATE TAYA!!!
 Reviewed By: Nemisis  On: March 06, 2003 05:45 CST
Comment/Review:
0.0 Yami doesn't deserve such torture... he's gone straight...er.
Make the whole cast play a game of "I Never" and get them all drunk
 Reviewed By: Crystal  On: March 05, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Can the dare include the submitter?Then I dare Yami to kiss me!!Discription of me:
Hair:vibrant red
Eyes:sky blue
Clothes:red tangtop,black skirt,white boots,blue gloves
Voice:musical
 Reviewed By: Yuki  On: March 05, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
DO YAMI NEXT!!!!! Make him .........kiss.............Yami Bakura and Yami Marik with his pants down!!!!!!!! MAHAHAHA!!!! lol

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