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Title: Note to all those who read my stories
Reviewed By: ravenwings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 17:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, it's been a while, I know, forgive me. Basic Training took up a lot of time, and AIT takes up a lot of time, too. But I'm home for the holidays, and as I was watching Zoids Fuzors and it gave me an idea for another fanfic. (No, it doesn't have anything to do with Fuzors, but for some reason it did give me an idea for another story.) Please watch out for the first few chapters soon!
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Reviewed By: ColdFang On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Like the Concepts the Story uses. This story has no conflictions with the Officially released material except for the time Difference! |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 05:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not quite as good as your other one... but over all pretty good. And about Zoids New Century(Zoids/Zero) ending, well that's partially true. There's a new series(freaking finaly!) that is a sequal to ZNC. It's called Zoids Fuzor, and I have absolutely NO idea as to when it will be released. I think it started airing in Japan a few months ago, but again NO idea. You're fan fic was good... but it could be improved. The B/L romance was a bit corny, but I know how hard it is. Sure sure, they MIGHT be already in love with each other, but think about it: Is Lena trying to kill Bit a GOOD way of flirting? |
Reviewed By: Michiko On: July 09, 2003 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!! Love it! Great work!!!!!!! Awsome!!! I dont know what else to say!!!!!!!!! Great work, thanks for that wonderful story!
Ja'ne |
Reviewed By: nthman On: July 08, 2003 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Son Rises is as good of a fanfic as I have ever read. I was truly drawn into the story and moved by the events. Fantastic job :) |
Reviewed By: Michiko On: July 07, 2003 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Fan Fics I have ever read!!!!! It is so good, I think I could cry. You should post this on Fanfiction.net and you will get a ton more reviews!!!!! Awsome, Awsome work! I can only hope to live up to authors such as yourself. but if you ever go to fanfiction.net, check me out under zoids, my pen-name is Sanity-Stealing-Lawn-Gnome. I bid you the best of luck on your next chapters! I will continue to check up on this story with great interest. I will never be able to exclaim how happy you have made me with this story!!! Love it lots. You are a wonderful author. Great work!!!
Ja'ne
Michiko |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: July 05, 2003 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got caught up and I wanna say that the last 3 chaoters are completely AWESOME!!!!Ravenwings,this is very well-written and it's really holding my attention!!I can't wait to see how the fight turns out!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: June 12, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved chapters 11 and 12 Ravenwings!!!!You're doing such a good job at capturing emotions!!!Keep it goin'!!!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: May 27, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still love it!!!I really like how you're getting into Van and Fiona's feelings and how they want to act like mom and dad.Keep it goin'!! |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: May 15, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it girl!!!The meeting between Van and Bit was well-written!!!I like the way you got into Van's tension about meeting his son for the first time in years!!You're doin' awesome!!!Keep writing!!I anxiously await the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: ShogunZX On: June 26, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When will the next chapter be ready? :) |
Reviewed By: ravenwings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have to say it was a lot of fun working on this sequel. Thanks to those who supported a sequel and pushed me to keep going.
I hope I didn't disappoint the ones that are reading this story. It's hard to create something from shows that have all ready ended! |
Reviewed By: zoid On: April 11, 2003 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, here's a tip put some romance in some of your sequels. Also don't have van & fiona in there 40's or 50's make them 26 or 29. |
Reviewed By: The Recruiter On: April 02, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is just the beginning of me reading your story. But so far it's really good. I know that you have talent. Find someone to draw a couple of pictures so some chapters. I think this would draw the reader deeper into your story. |
Reviewed By: Leap Frogg On: March 26, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better!!I can't wait until the next chapter's up!!Keep going Ravenwings!!YOu're are really good at this!!! |
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