| "Surviving Together: A New Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: sessakag [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2016 15:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Dragging the hell out of this Bulma and Vegeta reunion. Getting a
little bored here. Had to skim most of these chapters.
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Reviewed By: nienna18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 18:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis really is a mind-blowing fanfic. I love a good epic rather than a one-shot but all this angst!!! AHH after reading the first Surviving Together and now the Prolouge I feel like my emotions have been beaten and raped. Please be a little more gentle!!! |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never thought I'd cry about the death of Bulma but... oh thanks a lot. Thanks to you I officially think Bulma and Vegeta are indeed a good couple. Just when I thought I was 100% yaoi otaku. God dammit, you make them almost as good as Vegeta and Goku. Key word "Almost" Lets see how much of my attention you get once I read "Retribution" You may just cross the line, now being one of my new favorite authers ^.~ |
Reviewed By: bfh On: May 15, 2003 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic when will you start the new one?????? |
Reviewed By: Hunny On: April 27, 2003 13:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hate seeing Bulma go, but I get real tired of the damn "birds singing, sunny skies happy ending" everyone loves so much.
I have been waiting for the ending and I most certainly wasn't disappointed.
Beautiful job! |
Reviewed By: bEcca On: April 07, 2003 18:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! you just let bulma die!!!!!!!! omg your sooo mean!!!!! you cant just let her die like that!!!!!!!!!!!!! omng!!!!!!!!1 she has to come back to life!!!!!!!! your so mean!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 16:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FUCKIN SHIT! WHAT THE SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You must have a wonderful life to take Bulma's Because I HATE HER!!! but in this story i love her since Vegeta doesn't have todie ** smirks** anyways VERY GOD DAMNED GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 08:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
A great story and plot. Well written and definately kicks major ass. Arg. Evil cliffy. I will look out for the next installment. Bura400 |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 20:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
MY GOD!!!!! I CANT TAKE ITTTT!!!!!!!
Damn U!@ I have never cried so fucking much!!
EVILL!!!!!! EVIILLLLLL! But the story is soooo goodddd!!! I CANT HATE UUUU!!!! *Cries harder*
I cant wait for the next instalment to come now who r those pussies!!! I wanna kill them if they do anything to Trunks I swear I'll rip their throats out.Nah Vegeta will do it for me!
U like doing Clify endings dont ya!
Anyways please hurry up Im dying here!
Later *BULMA WHYYYYYY!!!!!!! Cries harder than before* |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 18:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! Oh man, that was a trajic ending!!
*sigh* It really was a great story, even though I was teary eyed at the end. I look forward to the next segment. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:15 PST
Comment/Review:
Hmm, Durka's dead. I do feel a bit sorry for the misdirected hunk of garbage. *shrugs* Oh well.
I've noticed that reading these A/U stories, that you really start to appreciate dragonballs and senzu beans. I wouldn't be so worried about Vegeta right now if either of the two were available in this fic. Ack, he better kick some ass! That's all I've got to say. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
I really love your fics, but I'm sorry to ask how trunks gets a tail when you specifically pointed out that he DID NOT HAVE ONE?
You wrote:
“Don’t lie to me, woman.” Vegeta hissed as he broke away from her. “The boy can’t be mine. He’s too young. He has no tail. And you weren’t fertile when we lay together. He can’t be mine!”
“Vegeta, I would not lie to you.” Bulma tried to explain. “Trunks is not too young, he’s almost ten. Yes, he doesn’t have a tail now, but that’s because I had it cut off after his birth. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 17:38 PST
Comment/Review:
THAT FUUUCKKERRRR!!!!! I hate Durka andCOOLER!!!!
Poor BULMA!!!! God what the hell is gpoing to happen now!!!!!!
UPDATEEE SOOONNNN!!!!!
PLEASEEEEE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: eljoebla On: April 05, 2003 09:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice update soon! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:43 PST
Comment/Review:
Holy Shit!! Durka must die! and I really liked him, too! Errr, cant' wait to see what's next. |
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