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Title: WTF MATE??
Reviewed By: star2bcaught [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
write up a storm uh?? 3 months before, you think thats a lot well you haven't writen ANYTHING for the past THREE YEARS!!
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Reviewed By: Kenshinfan230 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...plz. ._.
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Reviewed By: little inu On: September 13, 2004 14:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
please finish writing and upload the fic i want to read more more and more so please go on
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chappy was great so where's the rest well I hope you decide to up-date on this fanfic^_^
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Reviewed By: ZiKaA On: March 31, 2004 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, here's the deal. Basically, your fic sucked ass. You really made the Inuyasha team look really bad. I've heard of Mars, and I read some books, and they suck ass, kinda like your story. If you're gonna make an Inuyasha story, then make a good one. I've made tons of Inuyasha stories, and also have read tons of Inuyasha stories, and your's have got to be the worst. If this is offending you, I don't care. ZiKaA
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Reviewed By: Yo soy la Reyna Boriquen On: March 31, 2004 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyas, this is a really good fic, but it kina seems like it's a little too much of Mars than it is of Inuyasha. Don't get me wrong, a lot of people like it, including myself, so keep going, just it would be cooler if you made it more about Inuyasha. Reyna Boriquen
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Title: wacami_emie
Reviewed By: wacami On: January 29, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! I'm begging you... I really want to know whats gonna happen! Update!!!
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you haven't written anything for 3 months? TERY 8! I've been waiting for an update on this for what seems like years! And on Love Sucks too... but I just thought it ended at that point so...
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Reviewed By: silver talons [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 22:43 CST
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i love it! I've been collecting mars for a while and I haven't been able to find any fanfics for it so of course I'm going to love this! (I can't wait for # 15 to come out!) but anyway I think you shold maybe change the story line just a tiny little bit because I had the 1st book with me while I was reading this and it looked kinda identical so I think you should just kinda change the events a little but keep them the same, get what I mean? what ever if you don't want to change it or something you don't gotta listen to me do what you feel is best just keep writing! ja
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Reviewed By: Devils Santuary On: October 21, 2003 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you havnt updated in a while....but still i like this fic alout so plzzz keep updating no matter what, k? ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kiki On: August 03, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write "Love sucks" ( love that storie) and start working on this one! please!!!!!! thanks |
Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 02, 2003 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude this fic is off the hook. I cant wait to read more. onegai update sOoN,OR eles..... just playing but I would like to read some more of your fic sOoN... arigatou
Ja ne fo now .. good luck =p |
Reviewed By: Kagura-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, great fic! i absolutly LOVE mars, it's one of my favorite mangs! (besides ranma 1/2, & inuyasha of course) i was actually thinking of writing a fic like this, except i couldn't see inu screwing every woman in the school, & seeing kagome so shy, so i would make it a miroku/sango mostly. with inu as tatsuya (or however it's spelled) & kag harumi (same goes for this 1) i'd make naraku masao &... AHH i better stop while i still have some secrets left! well, anyway, what happened to kira in the book? i only read books 2-7 (it's all my library had. pricks) & i don't think they tell you until maybe book 8 or 9. i dunno, just please write more to love sucks, & finish it (i love that one to)so you can write more to this one!pretty please?
always~kagura-hime aka jen
ps~if ya ever wanted to chat, feel free to mail me! |
Reviewed By: bleedingwings666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 16:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
i havent read the fic but that is a competejip off mars
isent that coppywrited |
Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 14, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I would have never thought of a cross over with Mars. I love Mars and I just recently started collecting it. Um...just a few suggestions: Maybe to make your chapters longer you could actually put in what they're thinking instead of saying it yourself. Somnething like:
Inu Yasha sat down in his chair and looked over to Kagome who was blushing in the corner.
"Didn't I meet her somewhere before?"
Instead of: Inu Yasha sat down in his chair and looked over to Kagome who was blushing in the corner. Then he remembered meeting her somewhere before.
Keep up the good work! Well, update soon...look forward to reading more in this fic! |
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