| Reviewed By: Monstratboy On: March 12, 2003 15:17 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
This is a great opening, I can see alot of possibilities for the way the story may go and I'm quite interested to see how its going to change, I'm a real fan of Ranma crossovers and the fact that he deals with with women outside of the original. For a title how 'bout "From Boy to Man into Machine, or something like that.