| "Scalding Rivers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Maruken On: February 21, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sympathize with you on the"Freedom Fries" subject, we Americans are getting stupider each year, maybe even each second. I DON'T think very highly of the human race. You ARE pretty good a Ryou angst, I like it. I read Bloody Valentine, VERY GOOD!! Not the queen, that's Ryou-Bakura1 or Bishojo-Shadow, maybe someone below the Princess or 3rd place. Sorry, stopped making sense, it happens.
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 08:37 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- Oh!!! /Hugs Ryou/ That was so good!!! /Turns to Bakura/ You, on the other hand...
Bakura- Meep.
PP- That was--rude, uncalled for, and down right MEAN!!! /hauls off and smacks him across the face/
bakura- Make the birdies stop going around my head, mommy...
PP- /cracks knuckles/ And that's why you should never abuse Ryou. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 16:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I hate stupid Americans too! I hate being an american for the fact of belonging to such a foolish "race". Feh, oh well. Good story. |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story to death!! Poor Ryou...he's so sad. I like your references in the story. Very nice way of describing Ryou's feelings.
Are you going to continue this? Cause if you do I'll betcha it will be great! Please update soon!
P.S. Will this become a Ryou/Bakura yaoi fic in later chapters? Just wondering you know... |
