Reviewed By: Kaze Ryuujin the Wind Lord On: October 22, 2001 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was very good! you used my favorite song in the world, so of course i like it, but the fic was great too! the only thing ill tack on is that in some places you have KAri saying something, then you'll have a song verse, then you'll have "said KAri" or whatever. it's just a little confusing becasue it seems like KAri is saying that part of the song. other'n that it's all great! [sips tea] |
