| "I Love you Inuyasha!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: different
Reviewed By: beloved2615 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was ok, I agree though that even it being a dream to make it into a good story you should have added details and more to it. the title being I love you Inuyasha you would think they would be some sort of love shown there but not really. IDK deff needs more to it.
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Reviewed By: The Spirit Of Constructive criticism On: October 23, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of confused here.. Although it was a dream you could have: (1)Added some details to make it more interesting (2) Even though that's what they say in your dream you could have put what they actually meant to say. That's my constructive criticism for today.
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Reviewed By: Phoenix7 On: March 23, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now This.....This Is One Of The Best Written Fics I've Seen Yet! Hope Ya Have More Dreams Like This! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN, NOW THAT IS A WEIRD DREAM!!! DO YOU HAVE THIS TYPE DREAMS REGUALARLY!?!?!? |
