| "Flammentanzer" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 12:24 CDT
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update! update!
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Title: NOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: JackN [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 16:12 CST
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Dont stop! I love it!!! ^.^ So very good. Your English isn't that bad either. I like the character portrayal quite a bit. I feel bad for Ken though. T.T (Kens my fav) Hes so misled by the OC guy. ah well. Please dont stop writing this fic!! -Jack
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Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 12:50 CST
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Ah, I'm rather glad that you continued w/ this fic. Now you can't leave it there, when evil Schu finally has poor Ran in his possession! Hee.
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Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 22:40 CDT
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Ah, I can finally comment on this now!!! I love the sweet moments between Yohji and Aya, and want to see more of them. But I have this funny feeling things won't be so peaceful for long. And I really loke your take on Omi/Mamoru here! |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 09:14 CDT
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Great, another chappie! *pounces*. Now Schwarz is here, and happy joy, Schu seems fascinated w/ a certain redhead. Yes! Though now I'm torn between Yohji and Ran having their time alone and what happens to them when they get to the Facilities. And I"m wondering about Omi..... More please! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 05:05 CDT
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Ummmm... I just wanted to bug you about the next chapter, please? I've just reread it again and I really, really want to know what happens, okay? *puppy eyes again* |
Reviewed By: Reena On: April 23, 2003 01:21 CDT
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Aww... Ran/Yohji.. ^^
Agreed with MiniMorr *shudders* |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wohoo! Two new chapters at once! Thank you! :D
This is becoming more and more interesting and I wonder about what will happen with Ken... And Schwarz? Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
About the pairings... Schu/Yohji/Ran? I'm going into that mood again... ;) Or just Yohji/Ran? Aaah... The possibilities... ;) Whatever you set up will be fine with me - as long as it isn't Ran/Ken or Ran/Omi or some such... *shudders and ducks possible rotten tomatoes coming her way* Then you'll never hear the end of it... ;)
I talk too much, don't I? Okay, I'll be a good little girl and wait for the next chapters instead... Bye! *muse drags her off again* |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 10:08 CDT
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Yeah! 2 chappies! What a nice surprise. And a bit of YxA goodness too. Hope the muse cooperates on that part. I'm happy to see that you're making this story your own, even if you did get the premise from somewhere else. Very nice. |
Reviewed By: Rianagreen On: April 15, 2003 05:31 CDT
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*grin* mysteries is the game ne?? I dont mind the pairing though.. sometimes in some story the pairings come along naturally.. but I hope no pedophilia though *shudders*
Please continue your story.. it's nice and enjoyable to read... |
Reviewed By: Meera On: April 14, 2003 06:52 CDT
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I just love it..pls continue soon ne:) About the pairing.. may I suggest Schu/Ran/Brad?*grin* |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 11:04 CST
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*nods agreement to nekojita about the pairings* YxR or SxR, if possible? ^^
Anyway, nice chapter, this is going to be a good one, me thinks... ;) You've got the right amount of mystery - boys on the run, evil scientist and perhaps a little Yojhi/Aya-romance? *puppy-eyes* Please hurry up with the next chapter! :) |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 09:38 CST
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Very nice to see an update! I think you're doing pretty good on the humor, and as for romance.... *big grin*, well, of course my votes would be YohjixAya, or if he makes an appearance, SchuxAya. Just some suggestions. I'll be looking for your next chapter, especially after the way you ended this one. |
Reviewed By: Rin On: March 23, 2003 06:22 CST
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*chants*
Yoh-ji-Ran! Yoh-ji-Ran! Yoh-ji-Ran!
hehehehehe....
mystery, shady backgrounds, bad guys dressed in black. yay! more! more!
*shaves Schu's head bald* there...better :P |
Reviewed By: evil Jy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 14:18 CST
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hmm... okay very ooc, but that doesn't have to be a problem *loves AUs*. I like the beginning and it makes my hungry for more :)
(always liked SK's Firestarter ^_~) |
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