| "Mortal Kombat: Death Blooms, So Does Love" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: MazokuRanma On: November 14, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the most part, I really enjoyed this fic. For one thing, it ranks incredibly high in originality, as this is the first Mortal Kombat crossover I've ever seen. Also, as far as the Love Hina crossover goes, it is one of the few I've seen out there (Surprising, actually, as Love Hina is just Ranma with a wimp as the main character. Consequently, this is another reason I've given this fic such a high originality rating... I've never seen a fic with a Keitaro with a backbone, and it is definitely an improvement), and definitely one of the better ones as well. I'd say my biggest complaints are the spelling and grammatical errors. I really can't stand to read a fic that has trouble with the most basic principles of the English language. Don't worry though, this fic isn't anywhere near such a low level; however, it could use a little work. Really, if you've already proofread your own work, the only way to fix this problem is to get a pre-reader who has the ability to identify and correct these problems. Well, that's about all the constructive criticism I can give you. Don't take the spelling and grammar rating too seriously... it just happens to be one of my pet peeves. I imagine for a normal person the mistakes are far less noticable. The only other flaw I can find with this is it's length... far too short in my opinion (;P). Anyway, I look forward to you continuing this. From what I've seen, it has only gotten better as it's gone on.
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Reviewed By: Concrete KaOn On: July 26, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write more this is a good fanfic I like the way you made Ranma apart of the Urasihma family and how Keitaro had powers
It be nice to see more of this |
Reviewed By: darkdrag On: July 04, 2003 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the idea of Keitaro not being a wimp and how he is a strong martial artist/warrior. very good story. ill be looking forward to the next update |
Reviewed By: kin On: June 10, 2003 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it waaaaaaaaaaaaaas fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun |
Reviewed By: rantaro On: June 05, 2003 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go
it was really fun can u cont. |
Reviewed By: Dragonheart7373 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a new twist on Ranma/Love Hina crossovers. I like it! Finaly a fic where Keitaro has some "guts" and isn't a puching bag like in the canon series.
Update soon! |
