| "An Unlikely Couple." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Silver_Yaoi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, this is a great story you have here! please write more? pretty please??
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Reviewed By: Stormy1x2 On: May 18, 2003 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic very fic! ^^ Nice flowing yet simple story telling with a unique plot and a pairing I have rarely seen - yet find myself enjoying very much.
My only complaint is the bastardized Mousse but I suppose you needed a villain, right? And him being the only Amazon male that wants Shampoo IS a convienient plot device to dangle over Shampoo's head.
I reallyhope you continue this fic. ^^ I read it once a while ago, and found myself eager for more fics of the Shampoo/Ryoga pairing, but yours is the best I've found. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby (not logged in) On: April 26, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool. The pairing is nice and I could see it happen. Ryoga's adorable. All the girls should be chasing him not Ranma! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Scott On: April 13, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love the concept of this fanfic. I hope you can continue. |
