| "Lightbulb" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: ROTFLMAO!!
Reviewed By: Katana14 (not logged in) On: June 17, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*still laughing* God, that was great! I think that you have a knack for all the comedy. It's excellent and original; I especially like your story where Houjou falls down the well. *laughs because she just finished reading that as well* You ended that one perfectly, but, man, you could make a whole story on these characters. What exactly were they working on anyway? This is great! I haven't spotted any errs on this, the paragraphing has the correct emphasis, and you describe ningen[human] character excellently. Kuso, this stuff is funny! I'm going to go read the rest of your stories now. Sorry for rambling, but I felt like I had to say something. Sayoo! --Mitsu Katana
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Reviewed By: kona On: November 18, 2004 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
yea.. What the other people did I think.... um .... um .... AHA! Bye ^_^!!!
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Reviewed By: Ophelia Revived [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I laughed out loud. I've had co-workers like that as well. A febreeze-blue plague.
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Reviewed By: kira aka kirayasha On: May 01, 2004 11:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*laughs* I liked this! Don't know why but I do! & I'm glad I found your other work, Ith! luv kira
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Reviewed By: Mabelle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, I truly love stories that I can relate to my life. Many times I have tried to explain things to people who just don't get it and ended up giving up before giving myself a headache. Very enjoyable, I have to congradulate you. Well done. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 17:46 CST
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That was a REALLY bad joke... How many monkeys does it take to screw in a lightbulb?...what a dolt, can't even realize it's mice...well, hey, you portrayed the idiot well...^_^ |
