| "Out of Your LEAGUE" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Chiyiros On: January 17, 2004 06:42 CST
Comment/Review:
... great story. Question - what's the first one in the series? Can't exactly find it... hrmmm... email at chiyiros@hotmail.com.
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Reviewed By: RadicalDreamer On: April 14, 2002 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very, very good! u were right, it was a little action-deprived but i know it will get better!(i hope) well please make the next chapter cuz i absoultly HATE cliffhangers! but terrific story!=) |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: March 16, 2002 05:44 CST
Comment/Review:
6 words: FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! (please) |
Reviewed By: Taiora_kenyako_Tkari_Jyoumi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2002 04:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Please Finish It's really good |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 10, 2002 06:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wheres the next part i NEED the next part!!!!!!! must...have...NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadowkatz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2001 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's the next part?? I've been waiting for absolutely FOREVER, so you better get it up soon!! I wonder why you've only got two reviews, I mean come on, this is a GREAT story!! I'll be waiting for the next part to come out!!! |
Reviewed By: biocat On: December 03, 2001 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was very good. I can't wait for the next part. |
