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Reviewed By: nightwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 19:46 CDT
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OMG DRAMATIC SUSPENCE i can't beleive it i really thought that aya died pff and we all know THAT happens thank u for writing ur superdeduper wonderful stories! it rocks! *gives Trinity Bennett a SUPERBIGHUG!*
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: November 13, 2004 15:47 CST
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gah your soo mean making me think aya died! but i love it any ways muhahahahh
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 22:23 CDT
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Excellant. Job well done. Enjoyed it immensely.
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Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 19:21 CST
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Nice ending! I got to the part with the gravestone, and I started thinking //Oh no, oh shoot, not *now*//...and then I got to the end and it was all okay ^__^. That was a beautiful bit of suspense you had going, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing in the future!
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Title: Loved this!!
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent original story. I loved it, mind you, you had me going with the last two chapters when Aya was shot, I nearly did the unthinkable and read the end but I stopped myself, and when I did get to the Epilogue I thought at first, NO then I kept on reading. You had me in suspense, I love that when it happens.
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Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: July 28, 2003 12:07 CDT
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WOW...FANTASTIC...for one second I did believe, that Aya was the one who died...but only one second ^_^...I'm soooo happy he didn't...thanx!
I like this scences...Aya is going through his katas (soo full of grace...hhmmm yummy ^_^)and Yohji is watching!
Oh, the lemon scene of yours was...WONDERFUL...it was sooo....emotional...really really GOOD !!!
Thanx for your fic...I really enjoyed reading it...*hug* ^_^!!!
Ja *till next time* ^_~
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...that is SO sweet! Good for them! Have I mentioned how much I'm enjoying this? ^_^
I'm very sorry to hear about your principal. I can't imagine what it would be like to have that happen so close... |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: April 26, 2003 13:27 CDT
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YAY update...sugoi ^__^!!! My my...that's hard, will Aya and Yohji ever come together ???^^ Gomen, I don't have a lot of time, now-_-!
But the thing that happened at your junior high scared me O_O...to be there when such a thing happens O_O...it has to be awful!
You know, in Germany we had a similar tragedy in Erfurt (you know what I'm talking about?)...there a pupil had killed 16 persons O_O and lastly himself...when I saw that, I only thought...OH MY GOD -_-, how awful!!! I really hope such things do never happen again, but I think it will-_-...though I DON'T HOPE IT!!!!
Ja
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *love* the concept, it is really original! I'm definitely hooked and looking forward to the next part! |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: March 31, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohhhhhh WOWł ^_^!!!!!! *Phew*...it was...it was...BREATHTAKING...another great Yohji x Aya fic (it is one...right ^_~)...I felt this...*think think* what is it called, ah...tingle^^ (*whispers*....I had to look in the dictionary ^___^...oh, I'm German, that's why I had to look^^)!
The kiss scene was GREAT...so soft and emotional^^...and I love such situations, you know at the middle of part 1, where Aya had his big appearance *haha look at me, I'm the sexiest person of the world*...*grin* ^____^....*you can close your mouths know...I know I'm irresistibly*...*laugh*...OOOOHHH I LOVE IT ^_______________^!
Saaa....keep it up this GREAT work and make me (us ?_?...aww come on, I know you all out there like it too, so...review review review ^____^) happy in writing the next chaps SOOOOOONNNN^^....ONEGAI ^___^!!!
Ja *pwweeeeaaaaseeee*
Koji-chan *I LOVE IT*^^ |
Reviewed By: Lyra On: April 03, 2003 03:31 CST
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I'm really liking this fic. It's neat the way you made it an AU, but still have the motivations of the characters the same. Can't wait for more! |
