| "Forgetful" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. Your story is really good. I like the fluffiness in it. It was so kawaii! You need to space out the story a bit, but otherwise, really good. I had to giggle when I read it. It was so sweet and cute. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! |
Reviewed By: Hot chick On: April 04, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story sas so cute Keep up with the FLUFFINESS!!
Rach-Chan-He he he.....SICKLE!!!
Hot chick-O_O OOOOOKAY....... |
Reviewed By: LeaMarie F. Rocket-Roquet [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your idea and where you were going with the fic, but it was hard to read. It needed to be separated out more and needed to be checked over again. But over all I liked the idea.
Keep on writing! |
