| "Sword of Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzers! Where do you get all your ideas from? Are you a Sonic the Hedgehog fan or what? I like you story but how will I know if it follows the other ones besides "The History of Speed". Also I couldn't understand sometimes how you write you sentence but man are your stories ever good. Keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is good.hope you update it soon.ja. |
Reviewed By: Firewolf On: July 11, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you sure this is complete? |
Reviewed By: Jennifer On: June 04, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I liked how you did Spin and I'm glad you gave sonic and speed their body back. Please write about how their training go. I'll be looking. |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to work on your style of writing and grammer. OTHER THEN THAT, I liked it! |
Reviewed By: SuperTripper On: March 31, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,Jiece,I liked your storyline and your characters but you need to work on that style. Some of the story is hard to follow the way you wrote it.Grammer that is lacking is a sad way to lose your readers attention but keep up the work, you'll get there. |
Reviewed By: Phil On: March 30, 2003 12:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This was just chapter one ? Can't wait to see two. |
Reviewed By: Jaz On: March 29, 2003 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Speed. What does he look like ? |
Reviewed By: Simon On: March 28, 2003 12:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Not Bad. |
Reviewed By: Ethan On: March 28, 2003 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good but you need to work on your grammar alittle. I liked the new characters.Maybe next story you can explain them alittle more.This is the first time I have seen your work. Keep up the effort. You have a great start. |
Reviewed By: Nathan7 On: March 27, 2003 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really cool. |
