| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nequam_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2008 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything else was wonderful but I guess it was because the story in the beginning seemed like it was listing for a good amount of chapters. Nice Plot!
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Title: I love that, too! XD
Reviewed By: Charles Filth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 14:25 CST
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i usually don't like ffs where guys were turned into girls... i usually really, really don't like them... i actually hate them... but this is great! you made a good job! pity you forgot the PMS thing! *evil grin* i love mariks jobs! but your yaoi scenes are really better than the hetero scenes! and of course the children are so cute! i guess you really are a great writer! (i'm not sure, because i'm not that good in english...) well, i think i'll go and read the sequel! bloody kisses, charles filth
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Reviewed By: yokoukurama On: May 03, 2005 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
giv a rattle i read the first one and fell in love with your seris please try to read this im catching up fast with you this is the first yaoi ive read and had such a good experiance im gonna read every story that you write.
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Wow... I read this fic for two days until I finished it. It's 1:25 A.M right now and I am happy that I finished this! ^^ I have been reading your fics since Wednsday! Tomorrow will be sunday and I shall start reading the sequel to this! I just loved EVERYTHING about this fic! Aunt Yami *snickers* I was cracking up at that one! And that one chapter where the kids find 'Puppy's Toys' had me laughing hysteracly! XD I just loved imagining Marik and Kura as Daddys. ^.^ They make cute daddys! And I also enjoyed the constant Anzu bashing! Ra, that never gets old! Oh, and the scene were Malik 'died' and Marik was crying, made my eyes watery. Seriously. ^^ I shall start reading the sequel tomorrow kay? Keep writting! It really makes us readers happy! ^^ Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 03:36 CDT
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OMG I finally finished reading this novel, took me 3 days! Man, can't get enough of the rod jokes. and another OMG... I've caught up with everything you've written... at least here on mediaminer! Gotta go hunting for those other two on another site now. I think I read at one point that they're also on ffnet? gonna go check there next. Nanny Bakura and The Rose and Ryou (I think that's what it's called) I can't wait now to read the next installment of Return to Hades! Ciao!
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Title: Fin!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh Im finally done and now I can get back to Anything for you! WHich is also a song by Evanescence! Omg I like got teary eyes when i thought Malik was dead and you still cease to amazze me about the thrill that goes on throughout the story. I like killed my computer because the babies were dead! Your style of lemon writing is great, you can always manage to put in a situatuion like baths and just get the mood going and I dont see that often, just find a bed, do it to it and your done, lol. And anywho when Marik exploded I was so shaken! And I need to get to read this now, Ryous dad is back at it! When will the bastard see through his sick and twisted ways?!!! I loved your stories and even though I want to read the next one, I dont want this to end! So until I review next time its ta ta for now, your great, and dont let anyone tell you otherwise!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Valea
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I was like on the verge of tears when I could totally paint a picture in my head of Marik, in those sillly fast food get ups and then your best friend like taunting you, not that I have ever been in that situtation lol. Yeah it was cool and the heat is still on with the on coming trial, *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 02:21 CDT
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hey Bakuras' girl I finally got a little access to a comp! not for long but it is better than nothing! I loved the rest of this story and will start on anything for you tomorrow you have already gotten past chapter 22! Sheesh that's a lot of reading but for you? heck I'll MAKE time to not only read but review as well! this series (as always) is great and as you can tell you have a great following here keep those sequels coming!!!! luv ya! --Cody-san |
Reviewed By: Malik's girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool this fic is so mint. |
Reviewed By: Nodjmet/Liz On: June 18, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FF.Net wasn't working, so i came here. ok, this is for chapter 23. um, the dreams were...different. i mean, Ryou's was so innocent and happy while Bakura's was so dark. guess that's 'cause Bakura's the yami and Ryou's the hikari. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wahhhh! It's all over! But it was great!! ^_^ I can't wai for the sequel!!! Have fun at your trip!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa what a ending. can't wait to part three. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 30, 2003 14:17 CDT
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Great idea for a sequel! Is Jessica really want to go along with taht? Ok she was Cinetti's lover, but Steven must be getting really OLD. Course if he doesn't want to die of old age i can help with that........... |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 29, 2003 22:47 CDT
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I just want to compliment you on your lemons. You have a knack for making each one different. Terrible twos.........i feel sorry for Bakura and Marik. Dads tend to get the worst deal. My nephew is two and at this moment he's sleeping in his crib. Normally my dad has to watch him every night so my brother/sister in law can work. now that i have no school im free. Two year olds are so sweet.........when they're sleeping. One of the times my computer crashed was caused by the little devil. They get into everything. I wish the four parents good luck in the last chappie and the sequel! That and maybe some asprin! MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 22:34 CDT
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Awww...That was cute! THE STORY IS ALMOST OVER!!! 0_0!! When is the sequel gonna be up? |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 29, 2003 13:34 CDT
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Angel: Awwwwwwww........it's so cute. So abou how old are Aten and Aria now? Two? five? Eleven? Fifty? ok so maybe not quite that old.......
Ryou: I'm seventeen aren't i?
Angel: Haven't you ever heard of waiting for children?
Ryou: I'm a MALE!
Angel: And i thought your mother had taught you better.
Ryou: I'm a FUCKING BOY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
Angel: 0.o I think you need a lesson in manners young one! *grabs Ryou's ear*
Ryou: YOUR THE SAME AGE AS ME!
Angel: Oh yeah! ^_^
Shadow: -_-'
Angel: *lights match* Shadow do you really want your tail to lose it's fur again?
Shadow: !_!
Ryou: Update! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! SEQUEL!!! Umm........
Bakura:It the last day of school
My god....YOU'RE RIGHT!!!!!SCHOOL IS OVER TODAY!!!
HURRY WRITE MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 23:38 CDT
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AWWW!! That was a cute chapter!! And they got Aria and Aten back!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 28, 2003 10:48 CDT
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Sorry i haven't reviewed. I had a biking accident jumping a speed bump and it jarred both my elbows so it hurt just to move them. Today i can actually type slowly so I'm working on it. luckily neither arms broke. No more jumping speed bumps for a while. Dang that was fun. Anyways keep up the good work and bye bye Anubis! and Cinetti! Good luck with the sequel! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 06:12 CDT
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Awwwww! Malike is ok ^_^ I love Malik!! Great chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha byebye bad guy. lol can't wait to see what never |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Hehehe *cough* hehe. Of course he rushed into danger without thinking how he was going to get out of it.
LD: Well, wouldn't you for the people you love.
Karen: Yeah, good point. You just don't think of the Yamis, well never mind. That is definitly something Marik would do.
LD: So the babies are babies again, they've got Malik back, Anubis and Cinetti are gone... looks like it is just about time for the sequel!
Karen: YAY FRIENDSHIP! I mean, uh, good chapter! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anubis is gonna get his ass kicked! Anubis is gonna get his ass kicked! YEAH FOR VIOLENCE!!! That means death and all that other crap I love!!
Bakura:....
How come nowadays everyone wants it quick and painless? Why not just torture? Its more fun that way.
Malik:Do you even care that I died?!
*laughs*Uhhhh....................I guess. I don't know. I'm just really happy right now.^__________________^
Malik:*glares*
Yes I'm really sad. I just don't show it.*cries*
Everyone:?
But why quick and painless?! How come noone ever tortures each other?! WHY?!
Everyone:-_-
PS-If you really want get and painless then all you have to do is snap the neck. That way they won't come back no matter what.
Just a friendly litle note from your neiborhood phsyco. ^________^
(Always run with knives. You'll get your prey faster that way) |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries like crazy* NOOOOOOOO! He can't be dead!! He just can't be!! NOOOO!!!!!! And poor Aten and Aria!! I was seriously crying!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaaaaa. so sad. waaaaaa very nice chapter even though it was sad. |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: May 26, 2003 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you killed malick(boo-boo) how could you do such a thing. nobodys going to be a perv with his yami like malick was. plus you know you were wrong to do that you better make malickand the kids come back after there kill abmuis(is that how you spell it).but please update |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 23:19 CDT
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Awwww, Aria is so swet. LOL @ the fact that Yami was playing with dolls. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 15:31 CDT
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The kids are gonna grow up? Awww! They're so cute at this age though! YAY! A sequel?!?! I can't wait ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 09:28 CDT
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Awwwwww! Poor Aten! He was so scared! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARIA'S SO MEAN!I LOVE HER!
Bakura:She has a thing for evil people.Explains why I'm here.
Karona:Or quiet ones.She likes them too.
SEE!I TOLD YA THE DARK MAGIAN WAS EVIL!!SCARIN' POOR CHIBI ATEN!!
Malik:You would've done the same thing.
*sigh*I know. |
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