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Reviewed By: Kye On: April 18, 2003 06:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! This story is going along great, I really enjoy reading it.
Poor Marik....Mr. Happy Pickel Hahahaha!! That's funny.^__^ I liked the Marik X Malik lemon it was sweet.
How fast are the babies growing? How long is it gonna take before Ryou gives birth?
Is there going to be more Anzu bashing soon?
Jeez I asked alot of questions this time, sorry.-_-
Ja ne^_^ |
Reviewed By: hato_chiisai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 22:12 CDT
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You are too mean to Marik. About the trial, won't Steven recognize Bakura? Won't he recognize Ryou? And what if Bakura gets called as a witness? He can't be Ryou and Bakura all at once!! Ahh! Confusion!!!! |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 17, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAOOOOOOO!!!!!!
MR HAPPY PICKLE!
MR HAPPY PICKLE!!!!!!
MR HAPPY PICKLE GODDAMNIT!
HOW FUNNY CAN THIS GET?!????!?!?!?
And that old lady... XD XD XD XD XD
*pause*
If Marik gets a promotion... will he be...
Mr. Silly Shake? |
Reviewed By: Ryuuka On: April 17, 2003 20:36 CDT
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sorry I haven't been reviewing for a while, I haven't had a lot of internet time lately. Oh my god you just keep getting better! seriously! But during the MalikXMarik thing I think you mixed their names up one too many times. But it was so cute! Marik loves him! but is Malik going to turn into a girl or not? I'm not sure not. Oh yes that will be hilarious! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*inside her Gundam*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!MR. HAPPY PICKLE!THATS GOOD!
Marik:Shut up!
Make me!
Marik:Fine I will!*uses the Mill. Rod*
No fair!*uses Mill.Shield*(Yes I do have my own items)
Marik:Damn.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!BOW BEFORE ME MORTAL!
Marik:Never!
*jumps to the ground*Bow down or I'm gonna use MY R.O.D!!
Bakura:O.O You have a rod?!That's just wrong!!
6_6 Not that sorta rod bakayaro!This one!*holds up Rabbit Of Doom(aka The R.O.D)*
Marik & Bakura:Ohhhhhhhh.
Bakas.WRITE MORE!JA NE! |
Reviewed By: Jocelyn On: April 17, 2003 19:45 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHAHAHAH
*two hours later*
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Mr. Happy Pickle! Heh he... more like Dr. Evil Burger... poor marik!! Oh jeez... EVERYONE'S GONNA THINK MALIK WORKS AT HAPPY BURGER!!!!!! Poor him... MAKE THE TRIAL SOON OR ELSE... well, i cant do anything, but come on!! Okay, i'm done! Ja ne!
~Joci~ |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yamis Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 19:36 CDT
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LMAO! Mr. Happy Pickle! That is just so funny!! But poor Marik though. He hates it there. *can't stop laughing* Oh Ra, I just hope the trial goes well, and that Mr. Happy Pickle, I mean Marik, finds his rod. I mean, how could he lose it? It's shiney! Noone should be able to lose shiny things! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-chan On: April 17, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ROTFL! Mr. HAPPY PICKLE?!?!?! HAHAHAHAHA! You are soooooo evil! *laughs so hard that she cries* ^_^ Marik is so sweet. He'd do anything to please his Ryou. But still... Mr. Happy Pickles? HAHAHAHAHAHA!
"Great. I misplaced my Rod! I didn't use it last night, so where could it have gone?"
Hahahahahahaha! You are hilarious, you know?
How my chapies till the baby shower? Me wants to know!
About this:
"Marik stared wide eyed at Bakura when he felt the slight bulge against his stomach. It was very faint, but there."
I am a little bit confused about that. Could you explain that to me? Pretty please?
I've decided that anzu is so unimportant, that her name doesn't even deserve to have a capitol letter. It should permanently be "anzu". ^_^
~Kitty-chan (hahaha, Mr. Happy Pickle...) |
Reviewed By: Aino Bakura On: April 17, 2003 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello! Sry I haven't reviewed. I just found the fic today. Anyway, it's really awesome! Anubis is evil!!!
~Aino~ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 17:59 CDT
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Happy pickle....hehe....
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! HAHAHA! LOL! They were toturing Marik!! HA! That was so funny ^_^ |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 17:23 CDT
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LMAO! OMG, this chapter was so hilarious! *busts out laughing* |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: April 17, 2003 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: Hehehehe......can't......stop laughing. Mr. Happy PICKLE!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
Natasha: *snort*
Angel: WHat the hell are you doing here!
Natasha: *innocent look*Nothing.......
Angel: Natasha more known as Nat is a snorting, perverted, sick, dumb pig. Literally.
Natasha: HEy! I'm not dumb
Angel: *flashes Natasha's report card* Then explain the FIVE F'S!!!!!!!!!!!
Natasha: So at least i still get better grades then Mr. Happy Pickle.
Mr.Happy Pickle: I don't go to school and I'm not Mr. Happy Pickle. My name is Marik.
Natasha: I'm hungry. I like pickles.........
Angel: Marik run. Be afraid be VERY afraid. |
Reviewed By: Yui On: April 17, 2003 16:56 CDT
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Mr. Happy Pickle! Hahahahaha! *wipes away tears* That's great. Poor Marik, but Ra is that funny. Oh, and so you know, Tenshi means angel. Bye, for now. *walks off chuckling and muttering Mr. Happy Pickle under her breath*
Until Next Chapter
~Yui |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 17, 2003 07:35 CDT
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I cant wait till they find out that they are both the daddies hehe somehow I think Iris is going to find that highly amusing! hehe not only was Ryou a girl for less then a day and got pregnant but he got pregnant by two guys at the same time!! Not bad for a boy hehe! |
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